Butchert Garden
After arriving at the harbor of Swartz Bay, we moved by bus for about 40 minutes and arrived at Butchart gardens.
[ After arriving at Swatz Bay harbour and travelling by bus for about 40 minutes, we arrived at Butchert gardens.]
Though it was a walk with the use of an umbrella because of drizzled, the garden was really beautiful.
[The garden was really beautiful, although the walk required the use of an umbrella because of the drizzling rain]
Everywhere was full of flowers and the garden was decorated artistically.
[Everywhere was full with flowers and the garden was artistically decorated]
We had one and a half hours of free time. However, since the garden was large and we needed to leave time to go to the bathroom and buy souvenirs, we walked around in a hurry while taking pictures.
[We had one and 1 half hours of free time. However, since the garden was so large and we needed to allow time to go to the bathroom and buy souvenirs, we walked around in a hurry while taking pictures.]
I noticed after I went to the meeting place at a specified time, that I forgot to take a photo with my 360-degree camera in such a beautiful place.
[After I went to the meeting place at the specified time, I noticed that I had forgotten to take photos of this beautiful place with my 360-degree camera]
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You are already at this beautiful place so you know about it - no need to use indefinite article 'a'</li><li>
You only notice something after it happens, so put what happened first, then say you noticed you had forgotten.</li></ul>
This is almost always the case.
[This is almost always the case.]
When I really want to leave it to my memory, I'm crazy about looking at the landscape and forget to take a picture. It was a shame!
[I really wanted a way to remember this experience. However, I was so crazed at looking around that I forgot to take a picture. It was a real shame!]
Hope this helps.
