A fresh start
はじめまして。ラアスです
よろしくお願いします
わたしわ日本をべんきょしている。
じゃまたね。
January 10, 2016
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De woorden van de dag!
Ik zal slecht schrijven maar ik moet het toch oefenen.
Vandaag leer ik iets over vragen.
Wat zijn dat?
these are the corrections where I do not 100% agree with the previous corrector.
Most of them are a matter of taste and not incorrect except for the Wie => Wat correction which would be marked as wrong since wie is a referral to a person while wat refers to something which is not a person.
the other correction which I mainly disagree with is the sentence: "Vandaag leer ik iets over vragen." which is closer to what your original sentence was and makes the sentence after it make sense.
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January 10, 2016
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Lunch
Ik bendeze maand een 'detox diet' begonnen.
this would be the correct word order and form of the verb (beginnen/to begin).
Zometeen kook ik een lekkere soep.
this would be the correct way to put this if you meant to say: "in a moment I wil cook a delicious soup".
