the Phantom of the Opera review - corrections/discussions of word choices are welcome!

Yesterday I went to watch  see  The (capital 'the' as it is part of the name) Phantom of the Opera in London's iconic West End. The show produced by Cameron Mackintosh is known to be the highest grossing musical of all time. However, when I first watched it three years ago, weirdly it did not strike me as anything more than a cheesy love story. But yesterday the spectacle completely blew me away from the outset. Celinde Schoenmaker in the role of Christine is absolutely stunning and has an impressive voice. Ben Forster expressed (can't think of anything better atm, any other idea?) lively the solitude and distortion that lies inside The (Capital again)Phantom who is torn  apart between keeping his love  as a  for (could use 'as' without 'a' but most people would use 'for' to give more emphasis) company and freeing her from his dark dungeon. Visually, I was awed by the staging: the candles, the chandelier, the costume, etc. The music composition and the visual representation brought the characters to life and extended the show outside of  Her Majesty's Theater   Theatre to a magical wonderland.

I was impressed by the talent and 'bad temper' of Cameron Mackintosh when his colleague and friend came to our classroom and told us interesting anecdotes about him. He is quick-tempered; he is maverick; he is meticulous; he is a genius. Now once again, I wonder what is inside the genius's creative mind.

Both are conjugate of "to wonder". I am wondering - present continuous. I wonder - present subjunctive.

It has gone too far to bother pursuing.

Yes, you are right; it should have the word "that".