my tooth

Hi, i want to tell you about my tooht tooth. Today i went a dentist because i had to take my wisdom tooth out. i entered the doctor´s office and i sat down. i expected a long and painful procedure but it wasn`t. The dentist took my tooht tooth out in one minute. i was surprised because he was so quick and i coulden`t believe how big it was my tooth with root was!. After that finally the dentist let me take my tooth!

use "so" in front of "quick"because you're emphasizing that his speed surprised you; exceeded your expectations etc.

try not to use "finally" because it sounds as if you are impatiently waiting for the dentist to give you your tooth, when in fact you're just stating the fact that he gave it to you :)

good work, keep it up :D