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Dear Mary, How is it going? Last night, I saw
the movie, Me and My Father, which you recommended to me last week. It was so
impressive. Therefore, I'd like to recommend my favorite movie to you. The name
of the movie is LaLa Land. At the Oscars, the director and the actress both won awards. It tells a love story about a musician and an actor who
fall in love with each other when they are on the road chasing their dreams.
However, I was intrigued by the great jazz music and fabulous surroundings in it
rather than the love story. If you love jazz music, I sincerely recommend it to
you. I am looking forward to communicating with you after you see it.
Best
wishes, LiMing