发给酒吧的电子邮件

您好：

我是一个名来自爱尔兰的音乐家。一两（one or two week ago?  you can use :一星期 or 两星期）星期以前我来了您的酒吧/咖啡馆， 我跟您说了如果您想的话有意愿合作我可以在你您们那边表演，。 <em>您给了我您的电邮地址</em>（it seems a little wired that put this sentence here）。我府附上一个文书，里面有几个网站链接， 这些链接可以让您看到我表演的视频和我歌的录音歌曲。在上海现在我一个人在上海表演， 大部分的时候间我一边弹木吉他一边唱歌。如果您对我到您方进行表演感兴趣我来你们的场所表演，请您联系我。 

此致
敬礼！
肖安

福州是不是很好的城市？Is Fuzhou a Good City?

最近我看在了解中国的城市。现在我不知道城市我想住哪个城市。你去福州过吗？我发现看到了如果我住在福州我可也可以在周末坐火车和去上海，深圳和其他大城市在周末。 

Lately, I have been looking at Chinese cities. Right now I don't know which city I want to live in. Have you ever been to Fuzhou? I looked and if I live in Fuzhou I can take a train and visit Shanghai, Shenzhen and other big cities.

PS： I think maybe you need care more about the sequency of words organization. Hope it helps you.

And I had studied in Fuzhou for 4 years, it is really a nice city.