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I want to improve my English and I can help you with your Chinese. If you need a partner or a Chinese friend~leave me a message. My wechat accout is ' lynne '. If you live in China, you should have an App like wechat. I hope you can talk with me~
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    昨天下了雨和雪

    昨天下了雨和雪,可是(但是)天空是(很)漂亮的。your sentence is English expression, that's the big problem, for example do not use 先天空是instead of(天空先是).黄颜色的(,)然后雨停了。(天空中出现了彩虹/彩虹在天空中出现了)彩虹出现了在天空。然后天空(变成了)是粉红颜色的。(Better use 外面)外边有(雨的气味)气味的雨。


    qestion: 天空现在是什么颜色/色?

    answer:粉红色(do not use 粉红颜色)

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    April 26, 2017
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  • Commented
    腐木不可以为柱
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    March 25, 2016
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    腐木不可为柱
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    March 25, 2016
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    Welcome to China.I am going to Beijing maybe this winter,I want to improve my poor English and I can help you with your Chinese.So you can leave me a message

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    January 15, 2016
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    最近的星期六

    (这个)星期六(我)有or(是我)最后的课程(maybe you can try to use一堂课instead of 的课程)。那的(天)下午我在(从)家出去。我 (,)到(了)一个小的广场(到 somewhere do something or just use 到了)。这个广场在近的大学和近的我的家(我的大学和我家附近),在那儿有很多摊子卖着不同东西的摊子。一个音乐会后来发生(后来附近出现了一个音乐会)。(,)其实那个音乐会没太好了(不怎么好),但是我碰到几个朋友。很久后(后来)我们决定去到一个近的酒馆(do something)。我们喝(了)一些瓶啤酒。以后(之后),我们(又)去到(了)一个饭馆(我们又去了一个饭馆吃饭)(后来表示过去的事情已经发生了,以后表示将来的事情还没有发生)。我们吃得太(lack of adjective,好or饱)了! 最终我回去家(最后我回到了家or最后我回家了)。

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    December 16, 2015
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