First Notes

I don´t know how to write a text because my English looks like a horror movie. However I want to improve my English every day for all my my whole [or my entire] life.
I think that´s it !!

Diwali festival

Today is Deepawali or Deewali. It is a festival of lights. It can be considered as the most pious and important festival of Hindus [this is fine, but maybe better: "It is considered the most pious..."]. It is said that on this day Lord Rama, after defeating Raavn, came back to his hometown Ayodhya. Therefore, people lit up their houses to welcome Rama. Since then, each year, Deewali is celebrated. We light up candles and diyas [I don't know what a diya is...] in our houses, and worship Lord Rama and the goddess Laksmi. Further fireworks are used by children.

[Happy Diwali!!!]

Travelling (2 "L" for British English, one "L" for American English - either is fine :) )

Last year I visited Haerbin,a north city city in the North. It's amazing.I have never seen this scenery although I grew up on in a east-north city in the North-East. There are ice and snow everywhere. [Even though this is grammatically correct, you'd probably still say "There is ice and snow everywhere]. The status, the door, the chair and the walls are made of ice or snow in addition to a big tool bear [?? Do you mean a polar bear?].They are so cute. I am was too excited to say anything as soon as I saw them. I will show you a photo taken in there. It's a status symbol called "年年有余（鱼）" in China and it implicate implies someone is rich on the in food and money. I like Haerbin.

[It looks beautiful, thank you for sharing!]