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    Please help me with my story...

    it is my homework.. it is a job interview..

    A: Good morning. Please have a seat
    B: Good morning. Thank you
    A: So, Julia, what are you doing at the moment?
    B: Now I am studying in a high school. I will finish school next year. T Then I'm going to go to Udmurt State University on a specialty lawyer to become a specialized lawyer.
    A: Julia, what post would you like to hold?
    B: I would like to be an assistant magistrate. For this I need to gain experience as a lawyer. I would like to work for your company to gain the necessary experience and skills sets to me.
    A: Clearly, it is a very good goal. Do you have Have you had experience as a lawyer?
    B: No, I never worked. I will be going to college to become a lawyer. However, I read a lot of professional literature and I help my dad at work.
    A: It That is wonderful! Your father is the judge? Is your father a judge?
    B: Yes, it he is.
    A: Good. This experience will help you in your work. When can you start work?
    B: After a year and a half (or put In 18 months). I will do the university and at the same time will be able to work in your firm
    A: Well, that you are quite satisfied as long as you are satisfied
    B: Do you mean I've got a job?
    A:Yes., Welcome to 'Zakon i poryadok'
    B: Thank you

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    November 15, 2015
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    Can you modify it for me? Thank you u!

    Kelly ender wood Carrie Underwood, an American singer, was brought up on a farm. She likes a variety of music, but she focuses on country music with great passion. To people’s surprise, she has her talent life began at the age of 13. Then a local businessman funded for her to arrive go to in New York. It is in vain that she recorded some tapes in New York. From then on After that, she had begun to explored in a career and faced many difficultis along the way and conquered various difficulties. However, in 2005, she participated in American ldol competition and won the championship. Transfering to a celebrity from a town girl. She had her first hit, called ‘some hearts’ "Some Hearts", was a smash.

     

    (Good paragraph. She is one of my favorite singers.)

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    November 14, 2015
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    Differences between Americans and Vietnamese in traveling.

    Hello, this is an writing task that my teacher required me to do. I hope you guys give me some advice if I have any mistake.

    From what I have learned in this chapter, I would say that living in the US is different from living in Vietnam because Vietnamese people don’t travel as much as American. While Americans people travel whenever they get chance, Vietnamese people only travel when they get big long holiday occasionally. After researchers did a 400 people survey, they announced the result that more than 50% people in Vietnam prefer to travel on some special occasion than on weekdays. Instead of choosing vacations like: Grand Discovery, hike packs on the back backpacking, riding bicycles, heading for or taking a trip to the mountains, seashore or national parks like many Americans, Vietnamese people choose to Grand Resort Travel by buying a tour from a travel company with full of services a vation package with everyting included. They would like to have travel days by car or taxi with a tour guide, shopping in big mall or market, enjoying local foods in a nice restaurant, visiting only some famous sights -see without wishing to walk to discover on their own. Another contrast between two nations in traveling is Americans are willing to travel alone sometimes, while Vietnamese people reject to go anywhere without their family or friends.

     

    (Thank you for sharing the difference between our two nations when it comes to travel. I learned some new things. Have a great day.)

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    November 14, 2015
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