Is there any mistake in grammar if i say "This APP can help me to be more happy?" Is there any mistake in grammar if i say "This APP can help me to be more happy?"

Is the meaning of "Everything That's Leaving and coming to Netflix in January 2016" clear?

I meant to tell people everything that's coming to Netflix in January 2016 and everything that's leaving Netflix in January 2016. Can i combine this two into"Everything That's Leaving and coming to Netflix in January 2016"?

I am writting a email, is this expression ok? Thank you for your participation. You are beautiful!!!<3 It will be 200 painting totally, choose randomly from the ones who participate. We will send a email to you as soon as you are chosen.

A message Hello ***.How are you? Please forgive my boldness of sending you this message as a total stranger. I am ZOE,a Chinese, a Drexel university undergratuate and a part of a really nice and hardworking team. My team is planning a actitivity in Ameican schools, we offer every girl a free hand painted portrait painting who participates. You only need to is send one of your chic pic to MODE Facebook, wait for one or two days and share your happiness with your friends.Check MODE Facebook for more details... This is a AMAZING actitivity, isn't it? I'll be waiting for your reply and below are our finished ones. (How can i express more honestly because it's really true, i don't want to be regarded as a scam.Thank you all)

What's for plan for this BlackFriday?

What's for plan for this BlackFriday?

这句话有问题吗？“What have not been done in your plan for 2015 yet? Be quick! Cuz...”

这句话有问题吗？“What have not been done in your plan for 2015 yet? Be quick! Cuz...”

I translated some sentences and i have no idea where the mistakes and improper expressions are.

I translated some sentences and i have no idea where the mistakes and improper expressions are.I'm practicing exactly correct English expression and polishing my skills up little by little.However, i do need a native partner to help me cuz i do not even know where the mistakes i've made which is really troubling me.

 

积分商城要来啦！！

自您进入MODE开始，积分游戏已经开始！
您的操作将使您获得不同数量的积分，（在notification中check）
而你的每一个积分都将给您带来意想不到的财富。
在商城来临之前，您的积分将不断累积，
而即将来临的积分商城就是您财富的兑换场所。
但只有你的积分总额超过其他所有用户，
你才能兑换MODE的至尊大礼。
(偷偷告诉你，有些任务每天都能做哦）

游戏还在继续，GOOD LUCK！

 

As soon as you signed in MODE,the credite game was on.
In the game you gain different number of credit due to your certain clicks(Please check the task in profile page)and the credit would bring you unexpected fortune.

Your credit won't stop accumulating until the Reward Zone arrives and it's the very place you can exchange your credits for fortune.
However,only if you got the highest score of credits,you could exchange the Super Fashin Gift.
(By the way, daily tasks can be finished easily)

Game's still on, GOOD LUCK !

Can i say"You have no idea how beautiful you can be until you dress right."?

我是想表达如果衣服搭配得好，你会更美~