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I have just started to learn Russian because I am interested in their culture and arts (music, meals, films, etc). I want to talk with native speakers and improve my Russian. Очень приятно.
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    こんにちは

    こんにちは。私は音楽を愛し、ギターを弾く。

    1."弾く" make sense enough, but "弾きます" maybe more natural here because you use honorific in next sentence ("できます"). If you don't want to use honorific, you should change "できます" in next sentence to "できる". You should unify them (I know it's difficult. Never mind!).

    私は機嫌が悪いギターにいるときに(、)私に(は)多くのことが(を)(ギターで)できます。

    2.You can use "に" for connecting sentences. But using "、" may make your sentences more readable, and I guess "、" is easier for you to use, because "、" allows you to be able to separate sentences :)

    3. You can use "が" here, but I guess "を" maybe easier to use, because you can use "を" for mark object in many cases ("case" here doesn't mean case (grammar terms) ).

    4. You can use "で" when want to make words instrumental case ("гитарой")

    また、私は風が好きです。

    5. Good :D

    The fixed sentences maybe still not natural so much, but they are grammatically perfect and easy for you to use... I hope!

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    June 27, 2016
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    Здравствите! Здравствите! Меия зовут Масахиро. Это мой первый ноутбук. Я не понимаю Русский язык. Я учиься. Так помогите пожалуйста. ---- I have just started to learn Russian. So I'm totally new to Russian (and also, my English skill is not enough yet). If something is weird above and here, would you please let me know it?
    November 1, 2015
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