About Myself

I am unable to read/write in characters yet so I have written this in pinyin:

Ni hao, wo jiao da wei
wo shi gong cheng xue shi yan jiu sheng , suo yi zai shi yan shi gong zuo
wo xi huan tan ji ta he kan shu
you san ge jie jie he liang ge ge ge
wo zhu zai Florida zhu le liang ge yue, dan shi wo lai zi Illinois
xue xi zhong wen si ge yue, yin wei wo de nü peng you lai zi zhong guo
wo xi wang jiang zhong wen he wo de nü peng you he ta de fu mu jiang zhong wen

提高中文水平

Could you please correct.

(In this part, we don't need to translate you know),我仍然有我的发音问题。我忘记了很多单词。

我认为，为了提高我的中文水平，我一定要多讲。

所以我准备了一些问题来因此我可以练习我的口语和理解.

You know that I still have problems with my pronunciation; I forget a lot of words.
I think that in order to improve my Chinese, I must speak more.
I prepared some questions, so I can practice speaking and understanding Chinese.

Dom's entry 二百六十五。R

我爱人见面了她的朋友。
我每天八点半上班。
我后工作后去散步。
我家有四口人： 爸爸，妈妈，姐姐和我。
波兰在奥林匹克运动会上取得两枚金牌。
在那里工作没有因特网。
我想减肥但我又买了一干酪饼。
我的爱人给了我一本书。

1. For the first one, it means the green one is better after comparation. 2. 来，来，来，我给你们介绍一下。I think this sentence is correct.