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莫斯科人的日记
大家好！
我叫阿流沙，我今年二十一岁了。我，住在莫斯科，。我是莫斯科财经工业大学四年级的学生。，我的专业是世界经济，。
我的母语是俄语。，正在学习英语和汉语。，我的英语比较汉语学得更好。
名字、年龄和住址属于非常基本的信息，能放在同一句可以让人快速了解而且再同一句，省去了许多不必要的主语“我”；大学学校和所学习的专业也是同一类型的信息，建议放在同一句；学习的语言也是同一类信息，建议放在同一句。
总体在这一部分没有太大的失误。
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我开始学习英语从六岁，
→我从六岁开始学习英语
我用电脑游戏自己学习了英语字母。
（“自己学习”建议改为“自学”）
在学校我七年左右还学习了英语。
→我在学校还学习了七年左右的英语
一共很多时间我学习英语，
→我一共花了很多时间学习英语
但是我一直不会用英语流利的说。
→但是我一直不能流利地说英语。
我企图学英语各种办法：
→我企图通过各种办法学英语：
看美国电影跟字幕，
不明白了很多词和都句子，所以不能理解情节；
→因为很多次和句子都不明白，所以不能理解情节
听力音乐，看英语电视，看bbc新闻什么的。
→还有听音乐，看英语电视节目，看BBC新闻什么的。
新词简直记不得.
→新词简直记不住
我还翻译一些电脑游戏文章，有意思的消遣，可是词也记不得。
→我还翻译了一些电脑游戏文章，那十分有意思，可是还是记不住英文单词。
被动词汇量有点儿提高了，积极的差不多不提高了。
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你们的学习英语的办法是什么？
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Because English is not the mother language, So I Direct use Chinese for fully express what I mean.I hope that you will forgive me.
To make my meaning clear, in the second part I revise sentence by sentence to give my version of Chinese Language habit.
The above is my opinion, hope that I can be helpful.：D
0 votedOctober 21, 20153Please take a look at this page
Are these sentences correct grammatically ? If two kind of those sentences are correct, please tell me the difference between those two kind sentences which were use 再and 就？
1_你想想就买吧。你想买就买吧。
“就”represent ： the movement "想" has been finished already.
2_ 你想想再买吧。
“再”represent :the movement “想” is not finish yet, after the movement "想" finished, then sb. will make a dicision "买"or“不买”.
3_你的病还没有好，病好了以后就上课吧 。
你的病还没有好，病好了以后再上课吧。
“病” is not recovered yet, so “再” represent the thing “病” is not finish yet.
4_ 你的病还没有好，病好了以后就再上课吧 。“病好了” is a hypothesis, “再”represent after the hypothesis “病好了” , you can go to class.
“就” and "以后" represent the hypothesis that “病” has been already Cured.
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Why this sentence is incorrect according to grammatica?
到中国以后，这个电影我再看了一遍。再→又“再” has the meaning of "又"which means again. “再” also has the meaning of “more” and “connecting link between two things”.
So to avoid ambiguity and misperception，“又” is more appropriate than “再”.
The above is my opinion, hope that I can be helpful.
0 votedOctober 21, 20150
