what is a green area? you have a complete sentence right now. nice!

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This is a loose translation of an essay, written in Japanese, about a Chinese movie. Would you correct it? Thank you in advance.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jmILz-JKu6OZHVnLd3LrCUtcAEmh0uO3mJRuPMPsbBo/edit?usp=sharing 

Here is the doc once again. I hope this helps. Sorry for the mishaps before.

In this case using while and when change the meaning of the sentence completely. "I'll finish my homework when you help me with the dishes." So this is saying when you help me with the dishes, when the dishes are done, I'll finish my homework. The second sentence "I'll finish my homework while you help me with the dishes." This means that while you are receiving help with the dishes you are at the same time doing your homework. When you use while most of the time it means something is happening simultaneously. Ex: Mom was cooking dinner while chatting on the phone with grandma. Hope this helps!

The evaluated values show many interferences exist during signal transmission, it is especially high in table C. Hope that helps!

There is nothing grammatically wrong with the sentence. But instead of saying "to pay" I'd say “A good way to show appreciation for your parents is doing chores around the house."

You can say both, but using while I think flows better "The bus passed while I was waiting for a taxi." If you want to use when I'd say it like this, "When I was waiting for the taxi, the bus passed." Hope this helps!

(1) The water reflects lights on the wall. (2) Lights are reflected on the from the water to the wall. (3) The lights, reflected on the from the water to the wall, are beautiful. 4.) The lights reflected from the water to the wall wave beautifully, like lights from a magic lantern. I tried to highlight the changes for you but it doesn't let me show them in this text box. Hope this helped!