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You'll be sent away with other ten astronauts to the Mars to finish the task.
Is this sentence correct ?The yellow phrase should be <em>"the other ten astronauts"</em> if you are talking about a specific group of astronauts, or <em>"ten other astronauts"</em> if not.
<em>Mars</em> doesn't need an article
A better way to write it might be:
You'll be sent to Mars with [the other ten astronauts]/[ten other astronauts] to finish the task.
0 votedNovember 9, 20151Sick and tired (This is not incorrect, but we usually use "sick and tired" as an idiom. I think the French equivalent is "en avoir votre claque"?)
Hi everybody, today I'm still a little bit sick. I've got the flu. Yesterday I was totally stuck in the couch. I didn't sleep well and I coughed (sounds like you just coughed once, "I was coughing" is better).
Today I feel better, I'm still coughing but I don't have a headache anymore.
My 2 year old daughter is sick too but less than me. I'm glad, I don't know how she'd have handled the pain.
I'm on vacation so I don't have to go to work and I can't take care of me at home.
I've got the impression of being worse at English at these times? I don't know why? Sometimes I think about that because I think I haven't progressed.
My post is short today because I have a ton of things to do today. (Only one "today" is needed) I hope you guys will have a great day today! See you!0 votedOctober 20, 20150- Je vais reprendre mes études Je vais retourner à l'université l'année prochaine pour étudier les langues étrangères ! Pour deux ans après j'ai commencé à la fac j'ai étudié les sciences de la vie : biologie, biochimie etc. Mais finalement j'ai décidé qu'une carrière aux sciences n'est pas vraiment pour moi. Alors, j'espère que je pourrai transférer à un cours aux langues étrangères, ma vraie passion ! J'ai soumis l'application et maintenant il faut que j'attende... S'ils m'acceptent, je continuerai mes études au français, et je commencerai à étudier le japonais. Ça sera vraiment un grand défi.October 17, 201520
I submitted too early by accident, sorry
My own view on this subject is mainly positive, because advertising stimulates creativity and has a good effect on the economy creating new employment. As well as that, consumers should be more wise about what they buy, especially as nowadays more objective informations can be found online.
Very well-written, good job!
0 votedOctober 17, 20150Essay advertising
Advertising is one of the most important and influential businesses in our modern society, where we are surrounded by ads on TV and on the Internet. It is the business of trying to convince people to buy products or services, in fact it has a wide-ranging effects on consumers’s choices and on the economy.
Firstly, companies spend a lot of money on ads with a view of informing people about their products, costs "prices" might be better and offers. A good ad can really make a difference between a successful brand and an unsuccessful one. Strong ads are usually funny and they feature the collaborations of famous actors, singers or athletes to persuade the public to spend money on something that, in most of the cases, they don’t really need. On the other hand, others make you think and make visible "make visible" sounds awkward here, perhaps "present" or "show off"? a good item that otherwise would have not reached the public’s eye.
Advertising is also one of the most prosperous business of all. It stimulates demand for products which in turn leads to more production and job opportunities. In spite of the current crisis, many young people have found in advertising a possibility to express their talent and creativity, and on top of that a chance to build up a solid career.
My own view on this subject is mainly positive, because advertising stimulates creativity and has a good effect on the economy creating new employment. As well as that, consumers should be more wisely about what they buy, especially as nowadays more objective informations can be found online.0 votedOctober 17, 20151
