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Hola! Me llamo Fiorelly y soy peruana. Estoy en nivel intermedio en mi instituto de inglés. Busco personas que puedan ayudarme a mejorar mi inglés (speaking and vocabulary). A parte, pienso que sería muy divertido poder ayudarles a practicar español. Puedo ayudarte así estés en un nivel súper básico. Solo háblame, acordamos para hablar por skype o por algún medio y comencemos a mejorar los idiomas que deseamos :)
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    Letter of complaint to your local council Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the parking fine which was given to me by the Council. Briefly, the problem is that recently I parked my car in a place where I thought it was legal. But when I returned I found a parking fine and it said that my car was parked in a wrong place. In fact, there was a no-parking sign but I could not see it because it was behind a tree. In order to resolve this matter I am requesting that you remove the fine that was given to me, and that you take action to change the no-parking sign’s position. Please contact me within 8 days to confirm that my request will be fulfilled. You can contact me on 1234 5678 during working hours to discuss this matter. Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter. Yours sincerely, Fiorelly Sovero.
    November 17, 2015
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    ‘What Dreams May Come’ ‘What Dreams May Come’ is a drama film. It is set on the 1978’s in The United States and the main actor is Robin Williams. The plot talks about a doctor Chris Nielson and his wife Annie. They have two children who die. Months later, Chris dies too. Annie feels so sad that she commits suicide and goes to the hell. Chris, who is in the heaven, goes to the hell to find her to go together to the heaven. He finds her but she doesn´t want to go with him so he decide to keep in the hell with her because he loves her too much. The decision makes them go to the heaven and meet again with their children. What I liked about it was the plot because it tells the story of two twin souls and how strong is the love that makes you do extreme things. I would recommend this film to people in love because it will make them cry and think about their partners.
    October 22, 2015
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    La salud y la comida rápida

    En los (It isn't necessary) Estados Unidos muchas personas comen comida rápida. La comida es eficiente ( I don't think that fast food is efficient but is your opinion) , fácil (It's better say accessible than easy) accesible, (In this situation coma goes after connector) y, muchas veces en la mayoría de veces, deliciosa. Me gusta la comida rápida pero no la como mucho seguido. No la como porque no es sanoa. La comida rápida tiene mucha grasa y sal. También hay contiene ingredientes desde químicos. Pienso que no hay una ningún problema si que las personas la (This pronoun is replacing "fast food") coman la comida acerca de una vez en una por semana pero no más que eso. Si una persona comae mucha comida rápida mucho, habrá una posibilidad de que la persona suba el peso y pierda su salud. La El problema es que la comida rápida es popular y demasiado deliciosa.

     underlined words = Words that I added to correct your mistakes.

    strikethrough words = Words that don't go or can go in a better way.

    ( ,muchas veces en la mayoría de veces, )= It goes between comas because it is  unnecessary, you don't need to say it but it sounds formal if you put it.


    It was an amazing text! Most of people who are learning english have mistakes in the gender of words[adjetives (sano - sana) and articles (La - El ). That's happen to people who speak spanish too so don´t worry. Other corrections are other ways that you can use to express yourself better.

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    October 13, 2015
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    Review of Pizza Hut Pizza Hut is an american restaurant. Most of them are in shopping centres like square San Miguel. The restaurant is decorated between an elegant and a cosy style. They even have pop music playing in the background. They serve a wide variety of Italian food and they specialise in pizzas and pasta dishes. The food is so delicious and cheap that you will want to ask more. While the food is delicious, and the atmosphere is cosy, the service is terrible. When I ate there, I had to wait one hour to be attended. I wouldn´t go back there unless they improve their service.
    October 12, 2015
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