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    我对幸福的看法

    回顾过去,周末晚上在家跟家人一边吃晚饭,一边看电视的时候,我感到幸福了。 那个时候我没担心过去和未来的事情,我只享受那个时候刻。吃力辛苦的一周之后,无忧无虑,享受休息,虽然就这是星星点点微不足道的,这是对我但这对我来说是幸福还有奋进的动力。为了幸福,除了我爱的人,会吃的食物,会休息的家,我又还需要什么?

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    I love italki I love italki It is the first time I've written a composition on italki. I have to say I love italki though I have met it for just a day. It is a good platform for language learners to help each other. I came across when I was preparing IELTS. I think italki will definitely be an important part of my life. Thanks ( PS: I wonder whether logic outweighs expression or vice versa in English)
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    一个朋友

    我今天想谈谈一个朋友的进度(进度→进步,I guess you may want to say "progress")。她以前关于投资什么都不明白了(delete 了),但是现在能做证券分析。她第一本看完的书是投资到特殊情况的书(Is "投资到特殊情况" a book's name?if that, add "一本叫"between "是" and "投资到特殊情况"; if not, add "一本关于"between "是" and "投资到特殊情况"。她开始证券分析的时候(add 做 or 从事 after "开始"),总是只看股本回报率、市盈率、债权转股权、市价 、帐面价值等。但是她以前不想看年度报告(delete 但是),因为她觉得太复杂。我告诉了她-你首先必须选一些行业,好好地学那些行业,然后再查看一些公司的资料。她现在不但能看年度报告,而且也能做更好的证券分析。

    虽然我投资股票,债券,房地产等,但是我总是做信用分析。我理财很多钱(我管理很多钱),所以我必须做尽职调查。我总是“杀”我要投资的公司(sorry I don't know what the word "杀" means in financial field,but I'm sure it's a mistake. Maybe others can help u),因为这样做让我知道我是否该投资那家公司并且该投资哪个证券。这样的分析更复杂,但是我觉得这方法是更好的。

    我的朋友上周做她的第一个限价订单。她学得好快。

    随便问一下,我现在要看一部生意有关的电视剧(add "与" before "生意“)。你建议哪部?
    还有,因为我是名投资组合经理,我不必住在一个城市。我要会去中国(delete 要 or 会),但是我知道签证的事情很复杂。你有什么建议吗?

     

    suggestion about visa: ask a question on 百度知道,someone will get help you

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    终于我写东西(我终于开始写东西了)

    终于我在写作文(same as above,try it yourself)。每天都我对自己说(我每天都对自己说) ”你天天在 italki 需要写作文(你需要天天在italki上写作文),可是每天都有另(delete "另")一个借口。我受够了!我决定现在我要写(我决定我现在就要写),所以我正在写呢。我已经得查两个词(我已经查了两个词),所以这意味着我在学着。但是,对我来说,写这样的作文的问题是,如果看这个作文的人看不懂我的意思,这个人会错误地改正我的错误。不管怎么样,我猜想那是挑战的一部分。

     

    Your selection of Chinese words is not bad. The major problem is the sequence.

    Go ahead!

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    May I join?

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    这不是一个笑话。我真的是中文老师。。。

    大家好!

    我叫大牛,在美国费城的一座(所)天主教高中做了中文老师。虽然我学中文的经验很丰富的,但是我的母语是英语,不是中文。再说,我还要教西班牙语 (我的西班牙语跟我的中文的水平差不多一样)。不但我每一节课语言都要换来换去而且我每一节课都要把学生管理好。 (每一节课,我不但要把语言换来换去,还要把学生管好)

    说实话,虽然这份工作的压力比较大 (至少比我以前有的工作大一些),但是我相当爱(热爱 OR 喜爱)外语教育的这行业。我不但很爱这份工作,而且莫名其妙的是我表现得还很好啊。我特别好运(幸运)。我觉得除了我特别漂亮的老婆以外这份工作是我生活中最有祝福得(值得珍惜 )的地方。

    italki这里有没有别的老外中文老师?请多多关照!谢谢!

    大牛

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    October 7, 2015
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    IELTS Writing Task 2 Education Insructions: In some countries, school subjects and course contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people think that teachers should make the choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree? My essay: It can be seen in certain countries that the government decides school subjects and course contents. Some education experts hold the view that it should be better if teachers have the right to make those choices. In my opinion, contents in primary and secondary education or concerning vocational education should be decided by the government whilst teachers should be allowed to make choices in tertiary education. In terms of low-level or vocational education, government’s control on contents has many advantages. Since the aim of primary education is to make citizens literate and equip them with basic knowledge, different and personalized contents may not have much difference on a student’s later studying and career. On the contrary, it could increase the government’s budget on education without significant rewards. Besides, it may lead to parents’ concerns about whether teachers are qualified to make those choices, especially in some deprived areas. For vocational education, it is not necessary as well because the top priority of vocational education is to enable students to have a good command of certain skills. However, in tertiary or higher level education, I strongly recommend that teachers should have control over the contents. It’s also because of the aim. Tertiary education is aimed to educate students and equip them with something like critical thinking and creativity. Those things couldn’t be learnt from same textbooks. So if teachers can control the contents, they can teach that to students more easily. Apart from that, an individual student’s performance in certain fields is largely related to his teachers. It means that personalized contents would help him more than same and government-decided contents. In conclusion, a government should decide the contents in primary education and vocational education and lessen the control on tertiary education. In that way, the country can enjoy both high literate rate and lasting innovation in science.
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