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我的新朋友们,你们好
我的名字是菲奥娜
我是澳大利亚人,住在阿德莱德. 我现在正在学习HSK2
我的英语口语和写作非常好!
In fact, I am a professional English writer. I have been writing for many years.
If you want your writing to read as if you are fluent in English, I can help.
多谢
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- This weekend I will visit to my parents and we have a dinner together. When you married and lived by yourself you don’t have more time to company with them. Go to work earning money and back home check kid’homework as usual. I love my mum and dad. Hope everyone’s parents healthy and happy.0 votedAugust 31, 20202
- That is a very complicated sentence. There is too much information in it. I would have written: “ Until a few days ago, I had not been handling this lockdown situation very well”. * Commencing with “Up until...” makes it read as if a sentence has been interrupted. It is as if they were progressing up from a previously stated situation. * “that most of us have found ourselves in” is a pointless addition. Everyone is in this situation. We all know about it. They don’t need to remind us. * Even if all that information remained in the sentence, the lack of adequate punctuation makes it agonising to read. I found myself holding my breath, waiting for a comma.0 votedAugust 31, 20200
- Speech Exercise - My Brother Simon 大家好, 我叫斐那,我是四十三岁。 我会说英语和我会说一点儿汉语。 Dàjiā hǎo, wǒ jiào fěi nà, wǒ shì sìshísān suì. Wǒ huì shuō yīngyǔ hé wǒ huì shuō yīdiǎn er hànyǔ. Hello everyone, my name is Fiona and I am 43 years old. I speak English and a little Chinese. 我有哥哥, 他是我的双胞胎。 他叫Simon. Wǒ yǒu gēgē, tā shì wǒ de shuāngbāotāi. Tā jiào Simon. I have a brother, he is my twin. His name is Simon. Simon 很高高的,每天他穿一条牛仔裤,头发短短的。他不戴一副眼镜。 Simon hěn gāo gāo de, měitiān tā chuān yītiáo niúzǎikù, tóufǎ duǎn duǎn de. Tā bù dài yī fù yǎnjìng. Simon is very tall, wears jeans every day, has short hair. He does not wear glasses. 他杨过一只小狗, 和一只猫。他以前杨过华儿, 但是很麻烦!他现在不养华儿! Tā yángguò yī zhǐ xiǎo gǒu, hé yī zhǐ māo. Tā yǐqián yángguò huá er, dànshì hěn máfan! Tā xiànzài bù yǎng huá er! He raises a little dog and a cat。 Before he raised flowers, but too much trouble. He’s not raising flowers now! 他家附近有商店,他可以走去银行,邮局和他的女儿小学。 Tā jiā fùjìn yǒu shāngdiàn, tā kěyǐ zǒu qù yínháng, yóujú hé tā de nǚ'ér xiao xue His home has shops nearby, he can walk to the bank, post office and his daughter’s school. Simon 喜欢旅行,他打算去过中国。他听说“不到长衬非好汉”。他想是好汉,所以他登长城。 Simon xǐhuān lǚxíng, tā dǎsuàn qùguò zhōngguó. Tā tīng shuō “bù dào cháng chèn fēi hǎohàn”. Tā xiǎng shì hǎohàn, suǒyǐ tā dēng chángchéng. Simon likes travelling,he is planning to go to China. He has heard “You’re not a true man if you haven’t conquered the Great Wall”. He wants to be a true man, therefore he will climb the Great Wall! 他有买一张飞机票去北京。放假以后他坐地铁去市中心。 Tā yǒu mǎi yī zhāng fēijī piào qù běijīng. Fàngjià yǐhòu tā zuò dìtiě qù shì zhōngxīn. He has purchased a plane ticket to Beijing. After he arrives he will ride subway to downtown. Simon 很担心。他对北京不熟悉,和不会说汉语。 Simon hěn dānxīn. Tā duì běijīng bù shúxī, hé bù huì shuō hànyǔ. Simon is very worried. He is not familiar with Beijing, also does not speak Chinese. 我告诉他, 不担心, 多中文会说英文。他是好的。 Wǒ gàosù tā, bù dānxīn, duō zhōngwén huì shuō yīngwén. Tā shì hǎo de. I told him not to worry, many Chinese speak English. He will be okay.June 18, 2017110

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