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IELTS writing topic
Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurant or canteens. Do you agree or disagree?
I think that cooking and eating at home is better than eating out in restaurants or canteens. I agree with this sentence because of factors like money, health and family relations.
Firstly, in my experience, cooking and eating at home is cheaper than eating out in a restaurant. When I eat in at a restaurant, I usually spend about $15. If I were cooking and eating at home, I would spend more cheaply less than $15.Secondly, cooking and eating at home is healthier than eating out in a restaurant. In my opinion, when people eat something in at a restaurant, they don't care about their health as because they will order something what whatever they want.
Thirdly, I think that all family families have their own respectively meals which have with individual tastes, as which they can't eat in restaurants.
However, I also think that eating out in restaurants is better than cooking and eating at home because it is easy to eat food which is from difference different countries. I think that if I try to cook food which that is from a different difference countries country, nobody I wouldn't knows how to cook it and about or make it taste right, even if it is has easy-to-find get ingredients.
In conclusion, cooking and eating at home and eating out in a restaurant both have advantages. But, as I mentioned before, cooking and eating at home is cheaper for money and healthier than eating out in a restaurant. Furthermore, although eating out in a restaurant is delicious as because food is cooked by a professional chef, I think that it is absolutely happy best to cook and eat with family at home. That's why I agree with cooking and eating at home is better than eating out in restaurant completely.
It's my first time to writing about an IELTS topic for me. That's why I think it's not good. I was wondering if you guys could check my writing.-
Careful with "which" vs. "that." (When using the word "which," it implies that the clause after it is not necessary, but is actually just additional information. When using "that," it implies the last part of the sentence is vital to understanding the meaning.)
There were a few problems with articles and prepositions, but overall I think the meaning came across well! :)0 votedSeptember 8, 20151Unforgettable Moment of Trip
I love traveling abroad and I have many good memories that I don't want to forget - stunning places, good foods, etc.
Most of the beautiful memories is that I expected in advance.
The moment of unforgettable memories, however, would come came when I don't least expected.
One of the moments is that happened when I met a tour coordinator - he picked us up at an airport - like a Japanese would!
At first I thought he wasn't Japanese, judging from his looking looks, but soon after he started speaking I completely believed he was Japanese.
I spoke to him in Japanese at normal speed, as telling him I left something in the plane. He caught what I said — unfortunately, the thing I forgot I didn't find.
After that we got on a bus. and He started introducing himself and said by using in perfectly Japanese,
"I'm still learning Japanese learner, please excuse any Japanese mistakes."
I was astonished, because I've met foreigners who speak Japanese very well, but I noticed they're not Japanese in terms of slightly different intonation and grammar.
At the same time, I was so impressed, as I know the that perfect Japanese needs so much effort.-
Some grammar mistakes and run-on sentences, but good work! :)
The guy in the story sounds really cool! Haha. I agree that it's hard to sound fluent in Japanese for non-native speakers!
0 votedSeptember 4, 20151The tale of Okinawa Japan ”Kasakasa and Koramata".
Today I write a tale of from Okinawa, Japan: "KasaKasa and Koramata."
Onece Once upon a time, There was the a hermit crab in on a sandy beach of in Okinawa.
One day, he went to play on the mountain near the sea.
He was always thinking, "I envy that each human has their own name. I want to have my own name."
When he was walking along the mountain path, he noticed that some dead leaves
make made a sound--<em>kasakasa</em> (it means rustling)--at his feet.
"I got it! I decided to name me myself Kasakasa！"
The hermit crab felt in was joyous and he started to walked.
When he went to in After a short while, he met a mouse.
To be continued
今日は、沖縄の昔話を書きます。”カサカサとコラマタ”
昔むかし、沖縄の浜辺にヤドカリがいました。
ある日、かれは海の近くの山に遊びに行きました。
彼はいつも”人間にはそれぞれ名前があってうらやましいな。
僕も名前がほしい”と思っていました。
彼が山道を歩いている時、彼の足もとで枯葉が”カサカサ”なっていることに気づきました。
”そうだ！僕の名前は”カサカサ”にしよう！ ”
ヤドカリは喜んで歩き始めました。
しばらく行くと、彼はネズミに出会いました。
次回につづく
参考：まんが日本昔ばなし
http://nihon.syoukoukai.com/modules/stories/index.php?lid=1062&cid=10-
I fixed some spelling and grammar errors, and tried to make the "kasakasa" line of the story flow better, like how it would in a children's story. I want to read more!! :)
0 votedSeptember 3, 20150
