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Language now is not only considered as a tool for communication among people, but it can be a part of success in their career, and therefore, affects their salary positively. Sooner or later, people will become aware of the necessity to learn a new language beside their mother tongue and might be forced to do that, which is increasing the concern over which ages are suitable for learning a language. Some experts do not think it is the good idea if children start to learn a new language at primary school, while others believe the benefits of this idea are outweigh the disadvantages.
It is clear that there are some drawbacks that might be considered when learning a new language at primary school. Firstly, children might be confused between the new language that they are learning and their main language. Another complaint is that children should be able to play and live a joyful life with no concern about studying one more subject. In this case, playing with toys and joining in mini-games with groups are some possible activities that most people prefer for their children at primary school.
However, a majority of investigators report point out that the children learn a new language 3 times faster than the growth people  adults, and their ability to comprehend and process the new knowledge, in this case is language, declines rapidly when they grow up. Therefore, the period of primary school could be the most suitable time for children to learn language effectively.

Note: excellent vocabulary! Just a few grammar mistakes like using the verb form of a word instead of the noun eg; complaining - complaint.