The most beautiful experience.

Well, time flies! I came back to Colombia from Brazil after two years!

I have been studying English for a time, in fact almost one year by myself. and by my own, so I had the opportunity to practice it English with some friends in Brazil. and I faced discovered something that everybody knows, the true importance of this beautiful language for our professional lives, but beyond that, I had the chance to see how many people from twenty different nationalities with a special cultures and a lot of stories that were waiting to be listened heard were all talking one language. The first time speaking English it was so complicated for me, because I felt shy and being was conscious about all my mistakes. but then I realized I wasn't the only one feeling that way, so I just could try, right? And I did.  and Now, when I look back in time, I feel so proud of myself, because even if I have a lot to learn, I´m still in on the path, I've also learned so much, a lot of verbs, phrases and pronunciation, but more than that, I met people, I heard their stories and made new friends.  Now, I want to speak a really good English very well and not just because of professional life, but for meeting people and keeping in touch with the special friends that have made me laugh loudly in a beautiful country.
So, Now I don’t feel more ashamed anymore and I want to encourage people who wants to learn Spanish. Don’t be afraid, because to learn a different language is great. (Well, I´m still bad in it [Which language are you talking about now, English or Spanish?] but I will get better) thanks for your help!

(By the way I have learned Portuguese, it is so beautiful)

Your English is very good. These are small corrections.  Keep practicing, and congratulations on learning Portugese. 

My dream!

Since I was a child I had a dream , it is to study abroad.
I like my country, but I would like meeting new people, to know visiting different places and to learning different languages.
When I finally finish the college I plan to make take a trip around the world. This will be so certainly be the better best moment of my life.

Different topics!

1-There are so many English learning videos on the internet. I'm all at sixes and sevens [I dont understand]

2-We don't have a dishwasher here in my home, I wash the dishes and cutlery manually. 
Housework is one of my most unfavoured chores of all, I actually do housework to help my grandma and my Mom and to avoid their anger. 

3-I wish I could have a back garden like Mister Duncan one !

4-I really do enjoy having figs or strawberry jam with cream for breakfast or as a snake snack.

5-I also love eating chocolate so much!
I think I have a very sweet tooth, but there is something strange me about me. I usually eat salty food after sweet foods.

Travelling.

Travelling is the best way to know yourself because you can live will have many experiences and meet different people. Certainly the most of theses experiences you won't forget the experiences you have. The opportunity to meet new people and listen new stories is awesome.
I prefer to spend my money on trips than on other things. For me Actually, this travelling isn't an expense, it's an investment. Every trip is unique and makes me feel different.
I love buying and using a new perfume with each new trip because when I come back home and use the perfume I'll remember the trip several times the trip. Travelling is awesome and I hope to travel much more.

Your English is very good Ivana.  These are very small corrections.  Very you soon you won't have anything left to correct : P

P.S.  I hope you do travel much more

Colombia/ Venezuela

I feel bad for about the situation [what situation?] between Venezuela and Colombia because we are brothers countries. Colombia has nice people and we love each other. I want this [what is 'this'?] to end soon.

Notes

I feel bad*
The border conflict was not in the past, it is currently ongoing. Use the present tense.  You didn't feel bad in the past, you feel bad now.

Also, note the word soon isn't necessary in this example.
I want this conflict to end.
I want this conflict to end soon.

Situation and this

Try replacing vague words to communicate more clearly and to make more descriptive sentences.

For example you could write:

I feel bad about the escalating border tensions between Venezuela and Colombia because we are brother countries. Colombia has nice people and we love each other. I want this conflict to end.

I hope this helps!!!

Vietnam, the place where I was born and grow up

I'm a Vietnamese student. I live in Ho Chi Minh. It's a big and vibrant city in southern Vietnam with the a population of more than 8 million [what?]people.   Ho Chi Minh city is the center of the economy, entertainment and education [where?]in Vietnam.Or you could write, ' Ho Chi Minh City is the center of education and entertainment as well as the economic center of Vietnam' My city is also famous for tourism. There are many tourist attractions such as: Duc Ba cathedral, Independence Palace, Cu Chi tunnel. The citizens are also literally friendly, they're also open minded and sociable. However, there will be one problem if you first come here: it's traffic congestion. There are a lot of vehicles [where?] on the road in during rush hour. Or 'There are a lot of vehicles stuck in traffic during rush hour.' You have to mention where the vehicles are.  Overally, Ho Chi Minh is an interesting arrival to experience. Welcome to Vietnam.
How about you? What do you think of when you hear about Vietnam?