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    I like it a lot!

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    December 28, 2015
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    What type of dream would you like to have?

    I guess that to dream is an one of the most important things to do of in life. But I also believe that there are some types of dreams that can't do make any difference. I think that because I really believe that coletive collective dreams are the most more important than individual dreams. I know that many people disagree, but what I'm trying to say is that when you have an individual dream, it is so good.... (but only for you?)Only you, in general. But when you have a coletive  collective dream its means that you will need to divide  share it with other people. (the more people?)How many people you can put bring together around of a dream, more biggest  the bigger it will be for everyone. I hope one day can realize a dream like that!

     

    Not bad! Some grammar problems, but it was understandable. Keep learning :)

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    September 15, 2015
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    Buonasera Claudia,

     

    my ideal room

    i imagine myself to liveliving at the lasttop floor, the most highhighest flat, of an historical building in an old city centre.
    i would like a wooden roof, and totally ("completely" would be a better word in this instance) white walls and a resin floor whitwith ceramics detailsdetailed ceramics. I like reading very much, so i think i couldwould design a library that takes up one wall, in front of that a completely glass window couldwhich showprovides thea view toof the city centre, like as a big picture inside the room.
    then i’d like to get there an hammock, a small sofa, realized withmade from recycled materials like wood and old cushions, and a yellow armchair. yellow is the most welcoming colour.. everyone of my friends could enjoy themselves and take relax there! it couldwould be a very intresting place!
    moreover i would put in a small table with only two chairs only… for romantic dinners withunder candle lights!
    that’s what i need in an ideal room : love, friends, books, relaxation, the sky, city lights and a fantastic view in a beautiful architectural and historical centre.. what else?!

     

    Not bad at all! It was understandable, you just need to correct some grammatical errors. Keep learning! :)

     

    I only had a few minutes to read over this, if you have any questions then feel free to message me.

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    August 29, 2015
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    My bad day.

    Today I havehad an argument with my girlfriend. I have not talked to her from since this morning. Without talking with her, I feel that like there is something missing today. Both she and I are kind of restive. None neither of us wants to admit the to making a mistake, no one wants to say "I'm sorry". I wish that we would were back to normal. I want to confess but I did have done that many times before. I just want her to realize her wrong-doing, but she is more wilfull than I thought. Until now, we do not say have not said a word. I am really confused now.

     

    Not a good day! The english is good. There are some mistakes with tenses. Try to stick to one tense throughout.

     

    Overall it is very understandable - well written and well structured. Keep practicing! :)

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    August 20, 2015
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