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- SHERLOCK; My Recent Addiction "It's more expensive to be addicted to anime than crack"; nothing I can say to prove or make this statement faulty because I've never been into crack. Only one thing I can affirm is that, it's really expensive to have anime as a hobby. May it be DVDs, action figures, posters, collectible items; it really makes my wallet suffer. I'm so into these things that I never thought that I would watch an english series ever. I watched gossip girl and House MD, but I was never hooked. I only watched them when I exhausted all the anime that I could watch. I didn't think I have the need to watch them right away. Then came SHERLOCK. It started when, of course, I don't have any anime left to watch (at Kissanime btw) and I asked my friend (Angela) if she has anything good in her laptop.. I told her if we could exchange some external drive and put everything she has and she told me about SHERLOCK and how brilliant the story is and I was like, okay I'll try to watch it unmotivated. It took me a week to remember that I had files in the external drive, that's how uninterested I am to english series.. seriously :) I just finished watching Akagami no Shirayuki Hime and I decided to take a peek at the first episode of SHERLOCK because I have nothing to else to do that day. IT WAS A BOMB! First of all, I was really clueless about the story. I mean, SHERLOCK generally is a detective so that was it. A detective. I didn't know he was that awesome. Secondly, I didn't know that the characters in this series were played by the same characters from "THE HOBBIT"; I AM A BIG FAN (Bilbo Baggins and Smaug's voice! How lucky can I get). Thirdly, I always find the british accent SEXY. That was a very big factor haha! Sexy & intelligent man with a wonderful voice with a great sense of humor accompanied by his funny side kick incorporated with bloody twists and unexpected turn of events; I WAS ON HIGH! It was the kind of story that I was craving for. It was not draggy like other suspense thriller series and every episode is nerve wracking, in a good way :) I'm really looking forward to the 4th season.. I love Benedict Cumberbatch and Martin Freeman... Two Thumbs up for this spectacular series!October 13, 201520
About I started going to high school (When I started going to High School) >> It's better to construct your title into a complete sentence rather than a phrase
I'm a high school student and I go to (since you used "I" in both sentences, you can use the article "and" to make it into a compound sentence) school by bus. When I was in Junior High, (you can start this sentence with this to make your readers undertand that you're telling a story from the past) I can go to school for about 15 minutes from my house. I got up at 7:00 a.m. because the school starts at 8:30 am back then. However, eversince I started being a highschool student, I get up by 6:00 a.m. since the bus that I get on every morning comes at 7:02 a.m. It was so difficult for me for the first time because i tend to become sleepy and tired in the morning. But now, I enjoy watching the view around and I read books while in the bus now.
Notes:
- your grammar is good :)
-however, your sentence construction becomes redundant sometimes :)
-please try to review on how to construct compound sentences because they make the paragraph more coherent :)
- be careful with the words you use and always consult a dictionary if there's a word that confuses you :)
- review on the proper use of your PREPOSITIONS :) they're really important
-please don't forget to use pronouns in your sentence :)
-good job on your work! :)
0 votedAugust 20, 20150- English: My second language I grew up in a country wherein the society has a high regard for the english language.. Even I can't remember when i started using it because it was instilled to us since kindergarten.. our teachers use english as a mode of instruction.. funny right? Then came elementary and highschool, everybody in my class can speak it almost fluently as if the environment became an english speaking competition.. we were even required to speak english outside of class and when chatting senseless with friends... we got reprimanded when the teachers heard us speaking other language.. i am thankful of the training that the system of education here has provided us... i am confident in speaking english and joining italki made me realized that i have been taking the english language for granted :) so guys, if you wanna be my english language partner, i'll share everything i know in any way i can :) nice to meet you!!August 20, 201500
