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Hello, i am A Danish guy. Who likes the japanese culture and language. I plan to move to Japan when i know enough japanese.
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    Morgenmad

    Om morgenen, spiser jeg brød og jeg drikker mælk.Min kat spiser en fisk under et bordet.Efter jeg har spist morgenmaden,læser jeg normalt en bog.

    i dag så hoppede katten op på bordeten og den spiste en sandwich, min frokost!

     

    removed words "jeg" since the same subject is before and after the word og. you can just leave out the jeg

    also when you write something like in the morning. you don't just write jeg spiser. you usually put the verb close to the om morgenen then.

     

    en changed to et. bord is a word with et, not en.

    et is also removed now. since bordet is specified.

     

    after i have eaten = efter jeg har spist. same gramma in danish.

    am i normally reading a book. = læser jeg normalt en bog.

     

    then the cat jumps on my table and eats a sandwich my lunch. well. in danish it would be incorrect gramma because past tense is used earlier. so i would say. today or something at first. like today it happened differently.

     

     

    i am going to write your så,katten jump på bordeten og de spiser en sandwich,min frokost! and correct it also.

     

     

     

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    August 29, 2015
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    Skrev noget med timeadverbien

    Hun boede i en lejlighed, da hun var barn.

    Sidste sommer var vi i Spanien.

    I morges spiste jeg morgenmad.

    Jeg arbejdede ikke i sidste uge.

    Han havde to hunderne for fire år siden.

    Jeg lærte italiensk, da jeg var i Italien.

    I torsdags var jeg i ziekenhus.

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    August 29, 2015
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