Is it correct and natural- Have a good work week. I have long work days.

Could you correct my brief post? Many thanks in advance How are things? What's the weather like? Over here, it has been wet and overcast for several days. Sorry for not having written for a long time. I have been busy at work and moving to my sister's house. My Daughter went to school the first time on the first of September. She likes going there. After long enjoyable holidays I returned to my job to school. My students were happy to see me and so was I. I have a long working day especially on Thursdays. Unfortunately, I come home a bit tired and it is so noisy at my sister's house ( four children including my daughter are making lots of noise) so I have no energy and opportunity to prepare for IELTS exam and do some translations. That's all my news.

Could you correct my brief post please? many thanks for help How are things? What's the weather like? Over here, it's has been gloomy and rainy for three days in row. Sorry for not having written to you for a long time. On Monday I started my work at school. I was happy to see all my students and on the first of September my daughter went to first grade, It was her first day at school and in Russia it is considered a momentous day. I have been busy these days at work working long hours and came home late. I have had only energy to make a quick snack for myself and have had a bath. At weekends I am going to the centre of Moscow. I want to buy some books for learning for Russian for my friend. Also, I must go to the bank to deal with some banking issues.

is it correct when a teacher says to students DON'T PROMPT i.e Don't say answers to another STUDENT it is like a cheat don't say answers to your another

How is it called in English when a student say another student an answer as if an actor is prompted & how does this action- when a students says loudly an answer to another or writes to another students an answer thanks

When you have belated presents to your birthday you have such a great feeling as if your birthday is continuing as if you are still celebrating your birthday party and having birthday fun could you make this sentence natural and correct Thanks a bunch

Your boyfriend has taken you to such an expensive restaurant! It is so generous of him to take you to such an expensive restaurant to celebrate your birthday. Praise on him. Even if it was a belated birthday present to invite you to such a grand restaurant admit it it is great to have belated presents. Such belated presents for birthday are delightful surprises Can you make it natural and correct Thanks a lot

I am feeling a bit uneasy that I am bothering you with my asking to to correct my translated text is it natural and correct sentence?