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I live in the us, I'm a freshman in high school and I would love to learn japanese. I really would like to talk to japanese people and learn about there culture because it greatly interests me
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    Food shortages

    Although developing countries suffer from starvation, most advanced countries are wasting leftovers every day. This inequality will be solved and food shortages will be eliminated around the world in the future. First, genetically modified crops will be invented and adopted for infertile lands. By adopting these crops, productivity will be dramatically. Also, economic development makes it possible to overcome food shortages. As the economy grows, farmers can afford to buy equipment (instruments) which makes farming more efficint. Food shortages will become a thing of the past.

     

    your english is very good, i only corrected one mistake, the other changed i made were to improve the flow of your paragraph.

     

    ps please mesage me if you would like to skype (in english)

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    December 29, 2015
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    the easiest way to explain your answer is by saying, far is a far broader adjective, and faraway is much more specific. for example a native speaker may say "my goal is still very faraway" because faraway is more descriptive than far.
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    December 19, 2015
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    je en connias salut mon prénom est logan et je suis un américain élève. Je ne sais pas que à écrire au sujet ainsi je suis vais parler anime. mon favori anime est Steins Gate c'est incroyable. La fin (droit fin bizarre)
    December 19, 2015
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    December 19, 2015
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    December 19, 2015
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    "i shouldn't say that yet" is right some more uses would be its not yet time or the time has yet to come If you have any more questions please be sure to run them through me ill be sure to help
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    December 19, 2015
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    December 18, 2015
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    i dont exactly know what a Toefl test is, but im going to assume that it's a fluency test in witch case I dont think its possible to score over a 100

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    December 18, 2015
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    hmmm... this is a little difficult to answer, but id have to say that the question sentence is right because their own refers to being accepted by the blankets. The word own most likely means blankets in the context. Also if this dosent answer your question than please rephrase it because its nature is a little weird
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    December 18, 2015
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    i did'nt completley read your article but in the future id suggest that you suggest that anyone somewhat fluent should read english novels, seeing as how this was how i developed faster than most students.

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    October 26, 2015
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