my hobbies

My Hobbies.

my hobbies is board game.

My hobbies include board games.

OR

My hobby is playing board games.

Spotify: my new love.

I have been searching for new artists since last week, but unfortunately I haven't found out good artists in my point of view.

Since last week, I've been searching for new artists, but unfortunately haven't found anyone good from my point of view.

So yesterday, I was surfing on the internet and I found out a site that talked about awesome music sites, but only a site caught my attention, it was Spotify.

So yesterday, I was surfing around on the internet and found a site that talked about awesome music sites. Only one site caught my attention, and it was Spotify.

I signed up in Spotify and since then, I have been listening to awesome musics.

I signed up for Spotify, and since then, I have been listening to awesome music.

This site has every style of music like soul, R&B, french indie, etc. This site is perfect.

This site has every style of music, including soul, R&B, French indie, etc. This site is perfect.

I signed up for Spotify, and since then, I have been listening to awesome music.

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My weekend

Finally Saturday is here/coming?!

Finally Saturday is here!

Today I don´t have to work so I could sleep more than usual and could get up late.

Today I dont have to work, so I could sleep more than usual and get up late.

My parents have to go out for a meeting at the afternoon so I´ll be alone, I´ll have home only for me.

My parents have to go out for a meeting in the afternoon, so I'll be alone with the house only for me.

Now I´m helping my mom with some house chores.

Now I'm helping my mom with some household chores.

At the afternoon when they leave home, I´ll be able to switch on my stereo system to listen to rock music, plug my guitar and make some of noise LOL!

In the afternoon when they leave, I'll be able to switch on my stereo system to listen to rock music, plug in my guitar, and make a lot of noise!

On weekends I usually go out to ride my bike or take a walk with my dog but today my parents are who´ll have a brake, so I´m going to seize my time to fix some things.

On weekends, I usually go out to ride my bike or take a walk with my dog, but today my parents are having a break, so I'm going to use this time to fix some things.

Oh, I´ve forgotten to tell you, I just to find out that I approved the research project course (english level 9) that I was taking. That´s a great new for me.

Oh, I forgot to tell you, I just found out that I'm approved for the research project course (English Level 9) that I was taking. That's great news for me.

If things are ok, I think keeping with that kind of courses to improve my english and my knowledge about formulation of projects.

If things go ok, I think I'll keep taking that kind of course to improve my English and my knowledge about projects.

Well, I gotta go for get some to breakfast and I´ll be here in a little while.

Well, I gotta go get some breakfast, and I'll be back in a little while.

Tell me what about your saturday morning.

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The dangers and complexities of the modern world have made the mobile phone an absolute necessity fo

The dangers and complexities of the modern world have made the mobile phone an absolute necessity for children.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This is correct, but a more natural way to say it may be something like, "Do you agree or disagree? Why?" or "What do you think?"

Last years have witnessed an increase in the number of threats and problems that unusually endangered children.

Recent years have seen an increase in the number or threats and problems that endager children.

In spite of being convinced that mobile phone might serve securing the child , I don't think it had an absolute importance. 

In spite of being convinced that a mobile phone might serve in securing the child, I don't think it has absolute importance. - technically correct.

A more natural sentence might be: In spite of being convinced of the role the mobile phone plays in a child's safety, I don't think it is absolutely necessary.

To start with the troublesome situations that might face the child to see how mobile phone could help him .

To start with, let's look at the troublesome situations a child might face to see how a mobile phone could help him. - adding in "let's look" leads into analyzing the different situations.

First of all, threats that might endanger the child .for example;
;kidnapping trials: the child could talk to his parents ,or call for the police using his own portable phone, or falling in an emergency situation, like diabetic coma or asthmatic attacks

Some threats that might endager the child:

- Kidnapping. The child could talk to his parents or call for the police using his own portable phone.
- An emergency situation like falling, diabetic coma, or asthmatic attacks

This section lends itself well to a bulleted list, but since it cuts off abruptly, I'm not sure if it fits what you were going for. 

data analytics in manufacturing

How to make smart factory?

How do we make a smart factory?

Most countries is competing to acquire smart factory technologies.

Most countries are competing to acquire smart factory technologies.

For example german usa japan china.

For example, Germany, USA, Japan, and China. (Or: Germany, USA, Japan, and China are examples.)

It is main area to get the power for future capability in the world.

I understand what you're trying to say here, so I will suggest a few more natural ways to put it:

- Smart factories are the main area of focus for future manufacturing power and capability around the world.

- Smart factory technology is a top area of focus for manufacturers around the world.

- Manufacturers around the world list smart factory technologies as a main area of focus and development.

But it is not easy to achieve it in a short time.

However, it is not easy to achieve in a short time. "But" is a coordinating conjunction and is usually used to join two phrases. While you can use the word "but" to start a sentence, "However" has a similar meaning and may be more appropriate to use, especially in formal or business writing.

Any country that get the power in first can get much wealth.

Any country that can develop this power first will gain much wealth.

Alternatives:

The first country to gain this power will have a great financial advantage.

Any country able to harness this power can expect huge financial gain.

Hello!

Hello. My name is Elizabeth. I is from Russia. I learn English. Would you help me?;)

Hello. My name is Elizabeth. I am from Russia. I am learning English. Would you help me?