Self-Intriduction Introduction

This is my first essay. I'd like to introduce myself. I'm Yuka, a native Japanese speaker. I like to travel domestically and abroad, and listen to the U.S pop music!! I studied English for 9 years, but it was centered on reading and writing. I didn't study it whole-heartedly until 3 months ago. I want to speak English fluently in the future and have talk with people all over the world!! Thank you:-)

COMMENT: Yuka, Your english is great! Keep studying!!

Good evening, 

Sometimes my cell phone doesn't work, and but I don't realize it. When I notice that, I have to remove the battery and afterwards put it back in againg.

Thank you.

0831 - The Big Pool

The Big Pool.

This picture we can shows a beautiful place in the some a big house. There are is a great pool with some people in the pool. I think have there are four women, three women is stopping are standing and one other is swimming. And have others There are other people in the board poolside, they don't have beach clothes. I think (because have hot sun,?) maybe it is midday because we can't see their shadow. And have There is a man stopping to look at the pool and the landscape. Probably he had probably been in the house because he wearing a black jeans, a black shirt and holding a blouse (blouse usually only refers to a ladies shirt) or jacket, and with has a backpack.

Vocabulary:
- A man
- Pool
- Sunshade ( It is correct?) Umbrella
- Sea
- Sunbathe
- Beach lounge chair
- Summer clothes
- Landscape
- Midday
- Backpack

My friend Ana

My friend Ana is sick. She wents to the doctor two days ago and she had high blood pressure. I think she needs some advice and to change her lifestyle.
I gave her these tips:
Ana, you should take care yourself. You had better should (1) eat healthy food, stop smoking, working out and not work too hours.
You don't need lost to lose weight because you are thin, but if you ate a healthy diet, not junk food and ate quiet enough you would feel better.
The Your exercise routines is also very important. If you work out at least three times a week you would feel better.
If I were you I would work a reasonable working hours and wouldn't work overtime.

(1) "Had better" is not <em>wrong</em>, but sounds more like a threat. If you're giving advise, you would generally use "should". (Example, "You had better pass your English test or you will fail the entire course!") 

fashion photo

Me :Hello I would you like to take a picture for my fashion scrapbook? I like your style! 

Her: Of course
Me: My page is called malandrina shop....
Me: Thanks for your participation

would you please correct this letter for me? Thank you.

I want to have this letter quite formal and courteous. Would you please help me?

I am pleased to submit an original research paper entitled “.......” for consideration by the "........... ". I believe this paper, in spite of its simplicity, can have interesting results for all researchers using ........... and also for everyone who interests to anyone interested in .......... But tThere is a problem, however. I graduated three years ago and now I am not currently affiliated anywhere. Therefore, I have written (Independent scholar) instead of (the name and address of university or research institute). If this is not acceptable, would you please guide me what I have to do suggest an alternative? 

I hope you find my manuscript suitable for publication and look forward for hearing from you.

Thank you for your consideration
Sincerely,