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My first day of italki
"I found the italki and I joined it today."-> I found italki and joined it today.
(Also it would be abit more natural to say: "Today I found italki and joined." )
I am learning English for a long time.
-> I have been learning English for a long time.
When I watched so many people login here, I felt I was excited.
-> When I watched so many people login here, I felt excited.
(also it would be abit more natural to say saw or seen instead of watched because "watched" seems more suited to a literal/physical act, for example:
"I watched you leave"
Also instead of saying "login" you could just say "on here"
-> When I saw so many people on here, I felt excited.
"I meant they gave me a power."
by power I think you mean motivation, which would be more natural to say:
"it gave me the power"
or "it made me feel motivated"
"Though I have a little time to learn English everyday,"
-> This is good and fine as it is but I think "Although" seems more suited to what you're trying to say here, also adding in "only" would emphasise this:
"Although I only have a little time to learn English everyday"
I try to keep learning English and the other language
-> more than one language = "language's"
and I want to help someone who need help about Japanese.
• "need" -> "needs"
• "about" -> "with"
0 votedMarch 22, 20161My first notebook
Hi
My name is Anzu.
I'm a Japanese girl in Highschool!
I'm eighteen years-old.So, my hobby is listening to music.
I listen to: Chris Brown, Pitbull, Taylor Swift, Ariana Grande, Becky G, Katy Perry, Avicii, Zedd, Bruno Mars, Nicki Minaj, Cher Lloyd...and more!!!
I love music. I listen to many different kinds of music. Also I want to go to the United States and speak English.
It's my dream.0 votedAugust 3, 20151
