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    My first day of italki

    "I found the italki and I joined it today."

    -> I found italki and joined it today. 

    (Also it would be abit more natural to say: "Today I found italki and joined." )


    I am learning English for a long time.

    -> I have been learning English for a long time. 


    When I watched so many people login here, I felt I was excited.

    -> When I watched so many people login here, I felt excited.

    (also it would be abit more natural to say saw or seen instead of watched because "watched" seems more suited to a literal/physical act, for example:

    "I watched you leave"   


    Also instead of saying "login" you could just say "on here"

    -> When I saw so many people on here, I felt excited. 


    "I meant they gave me a power."

    by power I think you mean motivation, which would be more natural to say:

    "it gave me the power"

    or "it made me feel motivated" 


    "Though I have a little time to learn English everyday,"

    -> This is good and fine as it is but I think "Although" seems more suited to what you're trying to say here, also adding in "only" would emphasise this:

    "Although I only have a little time to learn English everyday"


    I try to keep learning English and the other language

    -> more than one language = "language's" 


    and I want to help someone who need help about Japanese.

    • "need" -> "needs"

    • "about" -> "with"

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    March 22, 2016
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    My first notebook

    Hi
    My name is Anzu.
    I'm a Japanese girl in Highschool!
    I'm eighteen years-old.

    So, my hobby is listening to music. 

    I listen to: Chris Brown, Pitbull, Taylor Swift, Ariana Grande, Becky G, Katy Perry, Avicii, Zedd, Bruno Mars, Nicki Minaj, Cher Lloyd...and more!!!
    I love music. I listen to many different kinds of music. Also I want to go to the United States and speak English.
    It's my dream.

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    August 3, 2015
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