Some Comments about State of the Union 2016

Hi everyone. Today I wrote something about State of the Union. Can you help me check it out please? I really appreciate it. Thank you for your time. Regards, Dayana.

Today in the morning, my good friend Patrick told me about the State of the Union 2016. I know this is a very important speech in the United States and also, this is the last one for Obama. I watched it on the through  internet, although it was very difficult for to me to understand it. However, I want to write about something that I understood.

Obama spoke about different topics such as education, social security and medical care, economy, energy, war, American leadership, congress and support to his agenda among many other other many topics. For Example; Obama spoke about the necessity to make college affordable for any American. Also he discussed how the told that United States is the most powerful nation in the world. Maybe the thing that most caught called my attention it was the necessity to reduce the power of money in politics. the money on the politic.

This was an interesting exercise because I can practice my listening and learn more about American culture. However, at the end final of the transmission I heard from some broadcaster that Obama did reference to Trump alot a lot of times to Trump. I’m not sure but probably he speaks about respect for diversity and religious. I picked up some words and ideas but I didn’t understand the complete message. I needed to hear the broadcaster’s comments in order to realize that Obama made reference to Trump in his speech. Finally, I would like to say that this speech promotes that American people feel proud about their culture and country.

Gringo Tuesday

Today was a great day. In the morning I worked and listened to music, and in the afternoon I went to a conversation club in the north of the city where I met 3 foreigners. The first one is a man from California, that is living and working here in Bogotá. The second one is and old men from Detroit, who is very funny and interesting, The last one was a girl from Ireland, "dublin" who is going to stay in Colombia for six months - she was beautiful and friendly.

May you help me to correct this message? Thank you so much

Good evening, nice to meet you Mr. mr. C*****o, this is S**a B****o, your new italian teacher. I would like to pick a day where we can meet decide with you a day to meet us and start our italian lessons. Does next week work for you? Is it ok for you to start next week? If so, please send me your address. I need your address please. Thank you so much and have a good night!

Good evening Mr C******o, this is S**a B********o, your new Italian teacher. I'm writing to ask here asking u about a day when we can meet and each other for start our Italian lessons. If it is ok for you, we might start next week. May you give me your address too? Thank u so much, and I wish you to have a good night.
S**a.

Which is better?

I must lmprove my english

Hello everyone
Today i decided to write at least one time a week in english to be corrected. 
I think that it is a good way to use my English and to improve it.

In what context?
:) 

The Sky

I like to look up at the night sky. The stars and the moon are amazing to me. Especially the full moon. I feel good. I intend to travel to North Irland one day; I will see the Northern Lights.