射箭的话题

我刚刚买了两张弓，一张是反曲弓，一张是长弓。
英国不允许狩猎，所以我只能通过射箭靶练习射箭。
我有几个狩猎箭头和军用箭头用来向学校的孩子们展示古代箭术。 

一张弓由弓弦和弓材组成。 

一支箭由箭头、杆、羽毛、箭梢凹口组成。 

I just bought 2 bows, one is a recurve, one is a longbow. 
In England, hunting is not permitted so I have to shoot at archery targets.
However I have a few hunting arrow-heads and military arrow heads in order to show school children the ancient art of archery.

A bow consists of a bowstring and a stave.
An arrow consists of an arrowhead, a shaft, flights and a nock.

don't waste time keep it don't do things in vein

we always make some prediction on objective things when used"看起来". 这件事看起来好像是他的错。 这个裙子看起来小了。 but if we use "显得",we are expressing our subjective feelings. 他显得很不高兴。 他这么做显得他很小气。

"怕"here likes the word 'afraid' i'm afraid so=恐怕是这样的

1“几年如一日”can be translated into "keep doing something for a longtime just like doing it in first day" 2为他不知找了多少家医院， 并且几年如一日地照顾他。 (she) took him to many hospitals and kept taking care of him for a long time 3评委听了暗暗点头。 “暗暗”means he agreed with it in mind but didn't show it on his face. 4他们就走出来看个究竟。 “究竟”here means 'what happened'or 'what's the situation''

韩国电影很好看。 正确 我要很功夫。 错误，应该是“我想要学到好的功夫” 我的岁是秘密。 错误，应该是“我的年龄保密” How to say "I like to study to play football" in Chinese? 我想学习怎样踢足球

按照中文的习惯，有一些主语是可以省略的，比如“你”、“我”等，参照我的翻译

Your essay overall is very well written. I can tell you worked very hard. I will edit a few minor things. After i finish editing your paper/essay, I will send it back to you ASAP. I will try to email it back to you by tomorrow. 你的文章总的来说写的不错，看得出你下了工夫。我会对文章一些小的问题进行修改，修改完后会尽快回复给你。明天之前我会通过电子邮件发送给你。