Our Youngs? (Quizás estabas pensando "Nuestros Jovenes"? Si es el caso, puedes escribir "Our Young Children," "Our Young People," "Our Young Ones," o "Our Youngsters" [aunque este es un poco informal, por lo menos en mi opinion])

Hello, friends!

I would like to write about the educations. The Last month I worked in a student's residence (Personalmente, no sabría que significa esto en inglés. Es un edificio en una escuela? La única cosa que puedo entender es que este es un lugar donde que los estudiantes viven, o es un hogar para los estudiantes. Quizás pudieres buscar una frase en inglés que es más clara). There was a group of students of Italy ("Italian students"), and they were 14 years old. Really (Tecnicamente esto es, uno, no necesario, y dos, se usó incorretamente. Usamos "really" en las conversaciones todo el tiempo, mas en manera incorreta la mayoría del tiempo...)  I think they haven't educations ("haven't been educated," o "aren't educated") because I visited Italy some years ago and I don't remember people so neglected ("people being so neglected," "such neglected people"). They threw trash on the ground, food, water... They were shouting the whole day. They don't comply with the rules (Para mantener el mismo tenso entre las dos frases, las escribiría asi: "They were shouting the whole day, and they didn't {versus "don't," la cual es del presente} comply with the rules." Aquí estás hablando del pasado, estás relantando de un evento especifico del pasado. Por eso, es mejor para usar un tenso consistente por todo del pensamiento. Porque nota la oracion siguiente...). And when we (employees) were asking them for respect they were trying to us to insult. (Asi: "And when we employees asked them for respect, they tried to insult us." En esta manera mantenemos un pensamiento unido). I think when I was more young ("younger" -- "er" significa "más [joven]," "más [viejo]," "más [bonita]" etc. {younger, older, prettier) than now (no necesitas "than now" porque es implícito en el contexto. No puedes ser más joven ahora que antes, no? Pero, si quieres ponerlo allí--bueno, está bien) my friends and me I (Estás correcta poniéndolo "me" después de "my friends;" sin embargo, no se trabaja así. Una buena manera para pensar de esto es, "si lo quito "my friends," se leería bien? Por ejemplo: "I think when I was younger, me was politer." No es "me was," mas "I was." Ves?) were more politer ("more polite" no es incorrect, pero "politer" puede ser visto más correcto). Really I am sad because this these youngs ("young children," "young people" etc.) will be the future in our society. We need have a problem.

<em>“Hello, friends! I would like to write about education. Last month I worked in a student’s residence. There was a group of Italian students, and they were 14 years old. I think they haven’t been educated because I visited Italy some years ago and I don’t remember such neglected people. They threw trash on the ground, food, water… They were shouting the whole day, and they didn’t comply with the rules. And when we employees asked them for respect, they tried to insult us. I think when I was younger my friends and I were politer. I am sad because these young people will be the future in our society. We have a problem.”</em>

The Controversial Choice to be a Vegetarian

Today the interest for the alimentation is grow ("Today the inerest in nutrition is growing"). Always More people choose ("are choosing") to be (preferisco, "to become," però "to be" anche è bene) vegetarian, but this is not often a choice driven by health motivation; instead, behind this choice there are also ethical reasoning ("reasons"). For example, the conditions of the animals (o, "the animals' conditions") in ("on") the farms, or the idea that killing animals are ("is"--"the idea" è singolare, non plurale. "Is" collega con "the idea" non "animals") always wrong, also for feeding (?--"for food").

I think that become ("becoming") a vegetarian could be a great choice indipendently by the moral issues ("for the moral issues alone"). Why? Because ("by") escluding ("excluding") the animal's protein (o, "animal protein") from the diet we all could stay better (preferisco, "healthier"). This ("is") because the human being (preferisco, "human beings". No sei sbagliato, però suona strane) has (have) not evolved to eat meet ("meat"), or milk or eggs. The vast majority of the diet of the human being ("The vast majority of the human's diet") is always be (o, "has always been") composed by ("of") vegetables and fruits. This ("is") because the agriculture was in past ("agriculture in the past was") the primary source of sustenance. Only in modern times we have at ("a") disposition ("to eat") so much meet ("meat") ("We only have a disposition to eat so much meat in modern times") because now we have farms mass (?--"massive farms," "factory farms").

The Red meet ("meat") is the main (...) responsable ("is the main thing/food responsable," "is mainly responsible") for cancer, and milk is one of the most untolerated ("untolerable") foods in the world. This for me is enough ("This is enough for me," "For me, this is enough") to justify the elimination of meet ("meat"), milk and eggs from my diet.

And what about fish? Well, this is an insidious (<-- haha, parola forte, però non esattamente funziona bene qui... "a tough/er" è meglio) issue. From ("On") one hand, fish is also a source of animal's protein ("animal protein"), ("but") on the other hand it's rich of ("in") Omega3's--a fondamental ("fundamental") research (?--"fundamental component") for (o, "to") our organism. So, at the moment I choose to not exclude fish from my diet, but in ("the") future I don't know what I will do.

Me Here! (<em>Tecnicamente si es un título, necesitas hacer las letras primeras de cada palabra mayúsculas. No sé como eso trabaja en español...</em>)

Hi, my name is Rosely. I'm/I am 26 years old. and I have a beautiful family and I (<em>la "I" es opcional; no la necesita si no quieres ponerla allí</em>) want to learn English because we will move on to live on canada (<em>tienes unas pocas opciones aquí...)</em>

1. we will be moving to live in Canada

2. we will be moving to Canada (<em>no necesitas "para vivir"--"to live" porque la implicación, por lo menos en inglés, es cuando una persona se mueve a otro país o otro lugar es para vivir allí)</em>

3. we will be moving to Canada to live (there) (<em>no estoy completamente seguro si se necesita "allí"--"there"... Es una opción y creo que escucha mejor y más correcto que si no estuvo allí. Sin embargo, a mi oído esta opción no suena buena)</em>

4. we will move to live in Canada

5. we will move to Canada

6. we will move to Canada to live (there)

(<em>Yo </em><em>escogería la opción número dos. A mi oído suena lo mejor, pero numero cinco está bien también.)</em>

the next year, and I need a better English for that (<em>otra posibilidad... "and for that I need better</em> English). I know that my vocabulary is too short limited, but I hope (<em>tienes unas pocas opciones aquí otra vez...</em>) 

1. I learn

2. I will learn

3. to learn (<em>esta es la opción la que prefiero</em>)

more here. Sorry for the (<em>o, "my"</em>) grammar and every mistake (<em>o, "all the mistakes</em><em>"</em>) here (<em>"aquí" también es opcional</em>)!

<em>Yo lo haría así:</em>

<em>"Me Here!</em>

<em>Hi, my name is Rosely. I am 26 years old. I have a beautiful family and want to learn English because we will be moving to Canada next year, and for that I need better English. I know that my vocabulary is limited, but I hope to learn more here. Sorry for my grammer and all the mistakes!"</em>

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<em>Sabes que aprendo a hablar y escribir en español. Por eso espero que entiendes todos mis commentarios en español jaja. Intenté... :) </em><em>
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