| Last month | Last 3 months | All time | |
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| Completed lessons | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Attendance rate | 100% | 100% | 100% |
。效率。
我们怎么能(如何)改善(提高)自己的效率?很简单,我们只要(“只要”后面常常要有一个以“就”开头的句子,比较像“if you…… you will……”)简单化我们的流程,专注于实用的解决办法。如果一件事不利于你取得成功的过程,那你就别管它。你必须有目标和战略(目标和战略并不是同义词,战略表示一种宏观的掌控,更倾向于strategy)并且按部就班。因为目标帮我们记得自己的理想,所以我们必须有短期,中期和长期的目标。制定这些后,你才要行动。始终简化(you mean 从头开始简化?)。这就是效率的秘诀。
You have a good control in Chinese sentense, however I think you'd better pay attention to the structure of your article , using link words like 首先,其次,然后,最终,最重要的是,总而言之,these words might help you
0 votedJuly 22, 20151- my favourite music I used to enjoy assorted kinds of music ,such as blues, country music, soul music , even classical music.However, currently, because of the busy pace of life, I have no enough time to appreciate musical works , I just listen to pop songs when I jog every morning. The relaxing songs help me feel dynamic and vigorous. In addition to, pop songs are easy to sing , I can share some lovely songs in Karachi with my friends.July 22, 201560
my favourite music
I used to enjoy assorted kinds of music ,such as blues, country music, soul music , even classical music.However, currently, because of the busy pace of life, I have no enough time to appreciate musical works , I just listen to pop songs when I jog every morning. The relaxing songs help me feel dynamic and vigorous. In addition to, pop songs are easy to sing , I can share some lovely songs in Karaoke with my friends.
0 votedJuly 22, 20151- if prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime the task content: In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extent do you agree or disagree? my answer: As the Bible says, “Forbearing one another, and forgiving one another, if any man has a quarrel against any: even as Christ forgave you, so also do ye.” Every individual may make mistakes for ignorance in immature age or transitory impulsion ignited by greed. Although people who make mistakes tend to be treated as evil criminals, they are capable to become virtuous saints. A chance should be given these laws offenders, forgiving them through the way of education and training instead of punishing them in cool prison. No one can deny the effective function of imprisonment. First of all, what ensures the fairness and justice in society is that guilt is published by imprisonment penalty. Moreover, the social stability and security can be maintained by depriving laws offenders of freedom. Nevertheless, imprisonment is not an ultimate solution but a beginning, there are further things need to do to help criminals with rehabilitation. Education leads lost criminals to the promising way, and training confers to them abilities and skills to live independently and respectfully. On the one hand, what can change a person is not punishment but education. Without education, laws offenders can not realize laws and distinguish right from wrong, anyone can not ensure they will be obedient and inoffensive. On the other hand, despite some individuals have kind willing, sometimes they have to break laws to earn their lives for lacking in survival skills. For instance, it is common that criminals are put into jail after releasing for committing a crime again. However, education and training can solve the problems well. To end this essay, I would like to quote the ancient Greek philosopher, Plato, “Better be unbound than untaught, for ignorance is the root of misfortune.” To avoid this misfortune, we should put more efforts to educate and train criminals.July 22, 201520
考完了! 现在准备我的东西前去中国学习!
我考完了所以我很高兴!(在中文中“因为”和“所以”常常需要搭配使用,前一句用因为引导原因,后一句用所以引导结果) 时候有(有时候)考试觉得(觉得考试)太应力(you mean 辛苦?吃力?)可是现在觉得自由!(这里加一个程度副词“觉得很自由”更好)
当我完成了我的考试我去都柏林旅行了跟我的朋友们(一般情况下,中文的主语和表示伴随状态的状语要放在一起,所以是“跟我的朋友们去都柏林旅行”)。 都柏林是非常美丽(“都柏林是非常美丽的”或者“都柏林非常美丽”), 有很多啤酒的各样, 有非常好吃的饭。 格外,买了机票是非常便宜! 但是,我觉得都柏林是太贵了!(都柏林的什么太贵了,词语搭配不当,应该是“都柏林的物价太贵了”) 如果你买了一份小晚饭你必须付出至少120RMB - 太贵了!!
星期六我会在飞机上的去北京旅行飞。我会住在北京一个星期。(星期六我会乘坐飞机到北京旅行一个星期) 之后,我会参加暑期学校在天津八个星期。(我会在天津参加八个星期的暑期学校) 分明我很要学习汉语所以我成为流利 哈哈。(其实我不太懂你的意思)
我听到在中国的天气已经非常炎热!(我听说中国的天气已经非常炎热)可望时候(可能到时候)我在中国我会晒黑。
Thanks for reading and good luck with exams :)0 votedJuly 21, 20150
