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I come from China, and I am living in the U.S. now. I am currently a undergraduate student at The State University of New York at Stony Brook, and I major in philosophy. For me personally, learning language is always important if one wants to explore more about the world. I came here for improving my English, also want make friends from all over the world :)
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    July 27, 2015
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    消费，收费， 付费 What is the difference?

     

    消费 is an action that describes you have willing to pay for something then gain what you want back.

    Example: I want to go shopping. (In this case shopping=消费)

     

    收费 is an action to take and store money.

    Example: The casher is who collects money. (In this case "collect money"=收费）

     

    付费 is also an action to pay for something, and it offten come with the action of getting something back.

    Example: I paid for her water. (In this case the word paid=付费)

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    July 25, 2015
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    July 24, 2015
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    Duties of Family in China The disaster always comes without notification. As it usually does, it came to my life, and crushed my college life. My family went bankrupt. It matters a lot for me, but when I calm down and think about the thing itself, I realised that Chinese families are overpaid for what they supposed to do because my family is still thinking about paying my tuition for my next semester. However, this is not a article that praises the selfless dedication. It is really not a good thing for both of me and other members in my family because all of our life can be effected by one's failure, and the failure of my family is somehow caused by familism. "Make your company your home." is a common slogan in Chinese company. When people find something hard to process with few people, they tend to form a unit with more people, and naturally, more people meant power of productivity. As an extension of solidarity, the concept marriage become a tendency of human community. Since marriage forms family, the original goal is to form a unit that can provide protection to protect family members. Family worked well at the first, it protected people from diseases, hunger, and accidental injury. As the result, fertility grew up in a fast way, population, productivity, and culture had exploded. However, it just worked well during the early human history. The exploded growth of population caused the problem of resource allocation. Since the resource is limited, but the wants of human is greater then what we can imagine, the problem of disproportionated distribution came as it should have done. Some people become very rich, but some people were not, they failed in competition. The risk of family showed up when disproportionated distribution happened because family as a unit of a group of people, it undertakes whole risk when one or more members failed in community. For example, assume a middle-class family has 3 members, and all member has some income. When one of the member failed in human community, other members in the family should give help for their duty that the ancestor signed in the contract of family. However, what happened in China is that family should give even more than what they are able to give during a disaster. For example, my family paid my tuition for my last semester, but the fact is that the tuition was donated by my family relatives. In my previous life, my family paid too much on me. Fortunately, I came to the U.S. and studied philosophy, then negatived them.
    July 24, 2015
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    这周末简直太倒霉了！

    一开始我和我的朋友们一起去钓鱼，并且我们还在海里撒（渔网用动词撒是最适合的）了渔网。但是在撒网的时候我的一个好朋友把她的手机连同渔网一起丢进了海里。（连同一词表达了同一时间发生的事情，使语句更加通顺和地道，并且连同是一个不俗气的词汇，更加偏向书面语而不是口语）真糟糕。(I guess you were trying to say something like "It's really bad," but it sounds 不中文 because it is not a Chinese language logic)终于我们拿不了了渔网还有手机。(This is a confusing sentence, I guess you were trying to say "We lost both of our fishing net and her phone." if it is what you want to say, you might want your sentence to be like:结果我们丢失了我们渔网和手机。) 


    然后回家以后，（终于和然后在你的文章中有冲突，最好的办法是把之前的终于拿掉，改成其他的词）我突然发现俩自行车都被小偷偷走了。

    你周末过得怎么样？

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    July 21, 2015
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    My Hobbies

    The first sentence must be something that can attract people, otherwise readers might give up on reading your essay. My ESL(English as second language program) teacher taught me this, and I always keep it in my mind. However, she also taught me that I need to stay on topic through my whole essay. Yes, I am good at memorisation, and I understand what is my ultimate goal of this essay; Topic is always important, however, for the gaol of this essay I think I should write what just came out from my mind to describe my thought. Thought forms information and language considers as a tool that helps people to communicate with each other. What I am doing is free writing, and the goal of it is training my brain to form my thought into understandable sentences. You might found that the last sentence dose not relate to the previous information I provided. Please ignore the logical mistakes in this essay because I consider it as a free writing. I appreciate my friend, you, for reading and editing my essay.

    I think I should go bake to the topic for an introduction of myself. I am a singer and guitarist, and as you can find through my picture, I do a lot of recording. At the last, I consider myself as a thinker because I love thinking, and it is why I chose my major in philosophy. I have to say that philosophy is not easy for me to study especially when I am not using my first language. It is really a challenge for me, but I enjoy it. Hope I might read as fast as English speaking students someday.

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    July 21, 2015
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    My Hobbies The first sentence must be something that can attract people, otherwise readers might give up on reading your essay. My ESL(English as second language program) teacher taught me this, and I always keep it in my mind. However, she also taught me that I need to stay on topic through my whole essay. Yes, I am good at memorisation, and I understand what is my ultimate goal of this essay; Topic is always important, however, for the gaol of this essay I think I should write what just came out from my mind to describe my thought. Thought forms information and language considers as a tool that helps people to communicate with each other. What I am doing is free writing, and the goal of it is training my brain to form my into understandable sentence from thought. You might found that the last sentence dose not relate to the previous information I provided. Please ignore the logical mistakes in this essay because I consider it as a free writing. I appreciate my friend, you, for reading and editing my essay. I think I should go bake to the topic for an introduction of myself. I am a singer and guitarist, and as you can find through my picture, I do a lot of recording. At the last, I consider myself as a thinker because I love thinking, and it is why I chose my major in philosophy. I have to say that philosophy is not easy for me to study especially when I am not using my first language. It is really a challenge for me, but I enjoy it. Hope I might read as fast as English speaking students someday.
    July 21, 2015
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