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Hi, I need to get a good IELTS score, (Academic overall 7.0) so I will study hard. Please fix my incorrect English. Thank you.
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    [part2: A Family Member] Describe someone in your family who you like. Outline: -How this person is related to you -What this person looks like -What kind of person he/she is -Why you like this person I love all my family members, but I would like to talk about my mother because I am especially close to her. She is of average height and weight, and has short black curly hair and bright sparkling eyes. Most people say she has clean skin and looks young for her age. She is passionate to learn new things. She enrolled into University when she was over 50 years old and now she is a student in a graduate school. She is also very outgoing and open minded so she dosen’t hesitate to make a new friend with foreigner or young people. One of the things I love about her is her sense of humor so it’s always fun to talk to her. My mom is my best friend, and we share our problems or secrets and help each other.
    July 22, 2015
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    Q1. Do you enjoy dancing?
    Yes, I enjoy dancing. Acutually, I am not good at dancing but I can dance and enjoy the party atmosphere.

     

     

    Q2. Tell me about any traditional dancing in your country.
    There are many traditional dances in Korea. One of the most well-known is the Buh-che-chum. In Buh-che-chum, dancers wear beautiful dresses and use large fans. In Buh-che-chum, the dancers imitate shaped images using the fans, for example, birds, flowers, butterflies and waves. They are beautiful to watch, and they emphasize the balance of nature. Many Koreans perform this dance during various celebrations.

     

     

    Q3. Do you think traditional dancing will be popular in the future?
    I don’t think traditional dancing will be popular in the future, because it is not that appealing to the younger generation. Actually, the younger generation is more interested in modern Western-style dancing and even in the TV programs they don’t show the traditional dancing.
    However, I think it is important to keep traditional dancing alive to preserve our culture and develop out national pride.

     

     

    I will take a IELTS 2months later. It is answer about IELTS speaking test.
    Please fix my incorrect English. Thank you.

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    July 22, 2015
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    July 22, 2015
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    Hi, I'm Cindy

    I need to get a good IELTS score, (Academic overall 7.0) so I will study hard.
    Please fix my wrong English.
    Thank you.

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    July 22, 2015
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    [Part 1:Dancing ]

    [Part 1:Dancing ]

    Q1. Do you enjoy dancing?
    Yes, I enjoy dancing. Acutually, I am not good at dance but I can dance and enjoy the atmosphere in a party.

    Q2. Tell me about any traditional dancing in your country.
    There are many traditional dances in Korea. The one most well-known is the Buh-che-chum. In the Buh-che-chum, dancers are women and they wear beautiful dresses. Dancers use large fans. In the dance being performed, the dancers represent shaped images using the fans e.g. birds, flowers, butterflies and waves. They are beautiful to watch, and they emphasize the balance of nature. Many Koreans use this dance during many celebrations.

    Q3. Do you think traditional dancing will be popular in the future?
    I don’t think traditional dancing will be popular in the future, because it is not that appealing to the younger generation. Actually, the younger generation is more interested in modern Western-style dancing and even in the TV programs, they don’t show the traditional dancing.
    However, I think it is important to keep traditional dancing alive to preserve our culture and develop out national pride.

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    July 22, 2015
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    [Part 1:Dancing ] [Part 1:Dancing ] Q1. Do you enjoy dancing? Yes, I enjoy dancing. Acutually, I am not good at dance but I can dance and enjoy the atmoshere in a party. Q2. Tell me about any traditional dancing in your country. There are many traditional dances in Korea. The one most well-known is the Buh-che-chum. In the Buh-che-chum, dancers are women and they wear beautiful dresses. Dancers use large fans. In the dance being performed, the dancers represent shaped images using the fans e.g. birds, flowers, butterflies and waves. They are beautiful to watch, and they emphasize the balance of nature. Many Koreans use this dance during many celebrations. Q3. Do you think traditional dancing will be popular in the future? I don’t think traditional dancing will be popular in the future, because it is not that appealing to the younger generation. Actually, the younger generation is more interested in modern Western-style dancing and even in the TV programs, they don’t show the traditional dancing. However, I think it is important to keep traditional dancing alive to preserve our culture and develop out national pride.
    July 22, 2015
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  • Answered
    "You are very good at Korean = 너 한국어 진짜 잘한다.or 한국어 정말 잘하시네요" "My Korean isn't very good= 나 한국어 잘 못해 or 한국어 잘 못해요 "
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    July 21, 2015
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    You are very good at Korean. - 한국어 잘하시네요. My Korean isn't very good - 한국어 잘 못해요.
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    July 21, 2015
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    Hi, I'm Cindy I need to get a good IELTS score (Academic overall 7.0) so I should study hard. Please fix my wrong English. Thank you.
    July 21, 2015
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