My narrative essay (part 2)

My grandfather’s house, a traditional Korean house, doesn’t have a restroom inside so I need to go outside to go to the restroom. One midnight, I wake up because I wanted to go to the restroom. My mind kept thinking about the scary house but I didn’t have a choice. When I came out to the yard, I could hear the wind, bugs' noise, and my heart beat. I tried to carefully move my feet step by step. Suddenly, I heard a strange noise from the next house. It sounded like someone played a violin in terrible condition. I tried to figure out where the noise came from but when I approached closer and closer, the noise disappeared. I just ignored it and went to the restroom.

After I came out the restroom, I was anxious and fearful. I thought I needed to go back quickly, so I ran into the room. At that moment, I heard a noise that was similar to screaming. I thought it was a ghost so I just ran fast as I could. I jumped into my bed prayed that the ghost wouldn't come in to my room. I felt like I was in a dream. After sometime, I fell asleep while hiding under my blanket.

The next morning, my mother and I left my grandfather’s house. I was thinking what the noise was but I didn’t want to relate deeply so I just tried to forget aboout it. After 3 years, I asked my grandmother about the next house to my grandfather’s. She told me a lot of cats lived there, and they were pretty noisy at night. I was glad to hear that my old mysteries were solved. The noise was cats' noise! However, one side of my mind said “What if it wasn’t cat?” Maybe. No one exactly knows what the noise was but one thing I know is thst it was a creepy moment for me.


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