ideas from you to improve my english.

Your ideas to improve my English.

in reading: I read a paragraph more than one time but I don't stand any thing!!! how can I improve my English? nota: I don't like to read. 

In Reading: I read a paragraph more than once, but I don't understand anything! How can I improve my English? Note: I don't like to read.

in lasting: omg!!!! i am so so weak in listing, when i listen to anybody or anyone speak in English i didn't stand any thing! real i feel bad at that moment. anyway, i want you to tell my how to improve my lasting or give my a link you had been try it.

In listening: omg!! (Haha) I am so weak in listening. When I listen to someone speak in English, I don't understand anything. I feel really bad in that moment. Anyways, I want you to tell me how to improve my listening or give me a link that you've tried.

writing: i am not so bad in writing because i save 5 to 10 vocab i use it in writing. but. i don't know the rules of writing and The correct punctuation, hope help my.

Writing: I'm not say bad in writing because I remember 5 to 10 vocab that I use in writing, but I don't know that rules of writing and the correct pronounciation. I hope you help me.

in speaking: I Retract and fear when i wan to talk, some tames i understand the question but i can not say it! it in my mined but i cant say it ! what can i do?

I get scared when I want to talk sometimes and I understand that question but I can't say it. I know it in my mind, but I can't say it. What can I do?

in the end, i saw italki, and they say yo my: its for check your writing, but Discovered that italki for everything, i hope to help my, thanks.

In the end, I saw italki and they said to me that it's for checking your writing; but I discovred that italki is for everything. I hope you help me, thanks.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4dr5lN1jqRE

Look for videos on Youtube.com like "English grammar". "ESL grammar" "Learn English grammar".

http://www.youtube.com/channel/UC_0NfufarVw04vDfWFm8z_Q

You should explore the ESL channels and English grammar videos on Youtube. I hope that you will help you. Good luck!

Hey, I would appreciate it if you correct my essay "Personalities"

Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.

Which do you consider to be the major influence?

You should write at least 250 words.

Answer

Several fields of knowledge have thoroughly demonstrated that human beings have characteristics of birth that shape their behavior. However, whether natural features have a bigger impact on building personalities than personal experiences is a debated topic. In my opinion, societies, social interaction and education play a major role in the construction of our conducts.

It is undeniable that every creature in the world including the human race have has a genetic charge that predisposes individuals to have certain characters. Nevertheless, experience normally changes those conditions. For example, people who never had had a criminal conduct and, for any reason, ended up in prison, in have a high rate develop a criminal behavior after being released. This change in personality is greatly attributed to the extreme, illegal and violent conditions experienced in jail. Thus, it is understandable how an extreme experience influence on personalities.

Education has proven to be a powerful tool when it comes to developing a correct behavior in individuals,(remove comma) whom do not easily adapt to a peaceful coexistence. For instance, in various schools, teachers have been successful in helping violent kids to control their natural instincts and shape their personalities. This evidence suggests that educational experience can have a big influence on youth development.

All in all, it is clear that is completely difficult to draw a conclusion about the influence of experience and natural characteristics on personality. However, I feel that personality is like a white canvas, which is painted by experience throughout the time. It is hope that education and societies at large continue to improve the comportment of the people.

Internet addiction

Nowadays, the internet is the most important way to communicate with the world, The relationship types (types of relationships)/(relationships)have changed respect (not needed) several years ago. Today, the internet is the first and principal marketing and business tool used by companies, more over, it is the biggest brochure that we couldn't even imagine.

However everything has a negative face, a dark side. Consequently, the internet too.
Despite all numbered positive reasons, there are a lot of reasons by which (why) the internet isn't perfect.

One of them is internet addiction. As I said, now we don't understand a relationship or friendship without internet, in other words, without social networks. Therefore you don't have friends if you don't have whatsapp or facebook, simply you be (are) no more (you don't exist)

As a result, we are continuously looking for new messages, we are always searching information about our contacts, we are always reading or typing. Then, in this moment, when internet addiction is starting, is when we forget that, there, just where you are, there are people.

Repeating "We are" in the same sentence is redundant and it's a run-on sentence. Otherwise, it was really good. There were only a few grammar mistakes.