thanks Itlaki :D
I've never wrote a large paragraph here, this is my first one. I made an account in Italki because of I have to improve my English since I'm physicist and on August 21st I going to travel to Servia to give a speach about my research. It has elapsed like 1 month, from I made login in this webpage and I'd like to tell you that I feel that my English has improved a lot. Thanks to the Italki community for by nice with me, I met really nice persons here and some of them are more than languish partners for me, them became my friends and I really thankful for met them. I hope continue improving my English and meeting new wonderful persons.
I would correct it something like this...
I have never written a long paragraph on Italki, this is my first one. I made an account with Italki because I need to improve my English since I am a physicist. On August 21st, I will be traveling to Servia to give a speach in English about my research. It has been one month since I first logged on to this webpage, I would like to tell you that I feel that my English has improved greatly. Thanks to the Italki community for being nice to me, I have met many nice people and some of them are more than language partners for me, they have become my friends and I am really thankful for them. I hope to continue to improve my English and meet new wonderful people.