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High heels
As the sizzling summer comes along, we can see more and more women in their high heels. High heels make their legs prettier and help them pull off their fashion even better, and this is why high heels are loved by so many women. Some even go onto saying that high heels are women’s ego booster(boost women's egos). However, doctors are issuing strong warnings against high heels that you wear to make your legs pretty because they can actually make your legs fatter, and you would better off wearing low heels for your ankle health.
Some medial experts say that if you wear high heels for too long and so often, you wouldwill strain your ankles and end up having a higher risk of sprained or swollen ankles. That is, When you wear in high heels, more pressure is applied to your ankles, straining your Achilles tendon. ForIn some cases, chronically sustained damage to the ligaments can develop youcausing swollen ankles, thereby making your legs look thicker. If you have had a bad backbone or weaker joints, the symptoms can accelerate at a faster speed. Some women end up having crooked big toes or deformed toes.
Therefore, one doctor insisted that the proper height of heels is 2 to 3 cm and wide heels are highly recommended thanas opposed to pointy ones. Plus, women should wear high heels no more than 6 hours a day, for 3 to 4 times a week. and If possible, they wouldshould take turns between high heels and low heels.-------------------
Great job! Although I made a few changes, there were no major grammatical mistakes. If you have any questions, or if there is anything I can help you with, please let me know.
0 votedJuly 13, 20171Realization 12.07.17
I watched the a video on youtube about "The Secret."
The "Secret" is about attraction. It is easy to understand the law of attraction.
If you think of yourself as a mangnet magnet, you can get whatever you want.
So thought becomes things (Thoughts turn into reality).
the What most people don't understand is the idea of a thought frequency frequencies which it means we can measure a thought (is a way to measure thoughts).
For example, if you focus on thinking about your bebt (debt), you will have a lot of pessimistic (OR negative) thoughts.
As a result, It would happen something negative will happen. But, if you are thinking over and over and over again or you're imagining in your mind having a new car, having a lot of money, building the company that you want or finding your soulmate, if you imagine what that looks like, you're emitting that frequency you will emit a positive frequency.
I think it's fantastic thought (idea/concept), and I realized that secret by thinking what happened in the past and I felt comfortable, peacful, and stable (I realized the veracity of the secret by thinking about what happened in my life in the past and, as a result, I felt more comfortable, peaceful, and stable).-------------
Great job! You wrote about a complicated topic and although there were a few grammatical mistakes, I was able to understand what you were trying to say. Keep working hard and let me know if you have any questions.
0 votedJuly 13, 20170よろしくお願いします
こんにちはもなさま。わたしにほんをしゆうぎよう。
Correction: みなさまこんにちは。わたしはにほんごをべんきょうしています。
<em>I changed the beginning to みなさまこんにちは because it sounds more natural. The verb しゅうぎょう means to work, whereas べんきょうする is to study. If you are currently doing something, then する changes to している which is then conjugated to しています , its more formal form. Good luck learning Japanese!</em>
0 votedJune 17, 20151Hola! :D
私はカルロスです。英語とスペイン語が良く分かる話せます。日本語、中国語、イタリア語とフランス語を習いたい (or 勉強したい) です!
Salut, je suis m'appelle Charly. Je parle spagnol et anglais l'espagnol et l'anglais. Je veux apprendre (or étudier) le chinois, le japonais, l'italien et le français!
<em>I could only correct the Japanese and French, but you seem to have done a pretty good job! I think that it is very ambitious of you to want to learn all of these languages and I wish you luck. Hopefully a few more people look at your post so that they can correct the Chinese and Italian parts! 頑張って(^^)</em>
0 votedJune 17, 20153
