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Visit the dentist
Yesterday, I visited my dentist. She told me that I have to set get a dental crown. I felt upset. Because at first, it's it was just a tiny tooth cavity, and I didn't feel any uncomfortable, so I ignored it. 3 years later, on day, I had a great pain on my tooth, so I went to the dental dentist, and the doctor said I had a bad tooth. She killed the nerve of my tooth, and I can't won't be able to use that tooth it for almost a year! I'd like to tell all my friends, if you have a tooth cavity, go to the dental dentist as soon as possibable possible!(Some notes... You can use the word "any" with nouns but not with adjectives, so you can say "didn't feel any discomfort" or "didn't feel uncomfortable" but you can't say "didn't feel any uncomfortable". "Dental office", "dentist's office", and "dentist" are all used interchangeably with "dental office" being the most formal and "dentist" being the most casual. "Can't" and "won't be able to" are extremely similar, but "can't" focuses on the here and now while "won't be able to" focuses more on the future.)
0 votedMarch 11, 20171- 最近の見た映画:ヒドゥン・フィギュアズ 先週末は母とヒドゥン・フィギュアズという映画を見に行きました。50年前に三人の黒人のNASAで働いた女性について話しです。女性は数学や工学が上手けど、他の同僚は同僚より弱くて遅いと思いました。女性も特別な問題と戦っていました。 例えば、50年前にアメリカに白人と黒人は同じお手洗いを使えませんでした。白人に向けのお手洗いのほうがたくさんあるから、ときどき黒人のお手洗いを探しにくいでした。毎日、主人公は事務所からお手洗いに20分ぐらいに走ってかかりました。後で、事務所に帰らなければなりませんでした。 絶対として、映画が好きでした。面白い瞬間と感動する瞬間もありました。日本に発売ときに、見ることをおすすめします。科学や数学や宇宙に興味がある女性があれば、特におすすめします。January 31, 201720
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Today
Today is my holiday a holiday (皆さんの休み、たいてい国立)OR my day off(自分の休み、仕事や学校など) :D
Today and tomorrow is are successive holidays!
I am very happy!
I bought some old clothes at a familiar shop near my house.
I can buy many a lot of clothes at a very cheap price in this shop.
I like to buy clothes and put their ???.
Lovely clothes makes me happy :)
Especially , I especially love Italian and French fashion.
The point reason why I love Italian's , fashion is that the design of it is very cool.
And the case of French's fashion, they it looks like elegant.
I feel that new clothes what we are favorite , we feel refreshment of our mind and body ! I feel that new clothes are my favorite; they make my mind and body feel refreshed! (???)NOTES: Last sentence was a little unclear, so I guessed. As for the countries, "Italian" is like "Italy's" and "French" is like "France's", so you don't need the 「's」/の part.
0 votedJuly 11, 20150Driving
It has been half a month since I got a my driver's license. And today, I drove my family's car. I could park it in a the parking lot in at the supermarket. And I also tried to park it in the parking place in front of our house. B, but the road and the parking space in front of our house are narrow. S, so I couldn't park. If I can't park the car by myself, I can't go anywhere I want. When will I be able to??
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0 votedJune 27, 20151I think of major companies like Samsung and Hyundai. Also K-Dramas; there used to be a channel on TV when I was growing up that was completely K-Dramas.
Kimchi too. I think of kimchi.
And then of course, the Korean War and continuing tension with North Korea because I like history and also my grandpa fought in that war.
0 votedJune 25, 20150My school trip
June 13th
Last week my school took a trip to visited the science museum, and it was really interesting. We got there so fast by bus. It takes took us about 2 two hours. We saw some farms and villages along the way. At the museum, I learned a lot about robots. I didn't know they could play chess with us. It was so cool! Then the guide taught us how to make a modle model robot. I took a lot of great photos, (no comma) too. After that, I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my parents. They weren't expensive didn't cost too much. All in all, it was an exciting day.0 votedJune 13, 20150
