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    June 10, 2015
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    One story of from my past and my present

     

    My past
    I was studying in a religious school. I had a uniform which had a navy blue skirt and a jacket . I practiced some sports. For example, I did ballet. I had a lot of teachers in my life but I remember some teachers because they were a great people. For example, I remember my chemistry teacher  of chemistry. She looked like a model because she was tall and slim. She told us that she worked as a supermarket cashier when she was young and she was studying for her degree. Now she is the teacher in a high school. I knowed knew her when I was 16 years ago old and I was studying senior secondary education. I remember one day, we were in chemistry’s class when our teacher decided to take give us a test. First of all, she connected a motor with the road (do you mean "the wheel"?) of a bicycle then she put a pen in the extreme at the end of the road. When the road will turn turned, the pen will paint would paint the sheet depending of on the speed but when the teacher Turn turned on the motor, the road started turning too quickly and the pen dirtied all of the tables, the roof, notebooks, people and walls. People shouted, “Turn it off, turn it off”. When the teacher turned off the motor, people started laughing at it. The situation was very funny. My teacher was a little crazy but she is was not boring at all, she is was actually full of fun. She is was very funny too.

    Nowadays
    I think there isn’t only a one good job in the world. For example, I am working at NGO as a receptionist. In my old job, most people wanted everything for yesterday (I am not sure what this means), if I think about this my new job isn't bad. In the future, I will have a gift shop because I want to do happy everybody make everybody happy and I would like to become a benefactor, for example, of the Red Cross. I want to help many people with their lives, jobs or problems. So, my father was an immigrant, and nowadays in Spain there are a lot of people without jobs and I think all people should have an employment opportunity. I think it is not right that a lot of young people have to go out of leave the country because they haven’t got (or: "they don't have") a job or and that when a person is about 50 years old, it they can’t get a job. At the moment, I have friends that is are in other countries (or: "that are in another country"), they were were working but they will hope to go (to come?) back some day. Ok, I am agree with that it’s a great experience and they improve their English skills or German skills. And I would like to work in another country some day but depending of it depends on the reason. I will travel because I like it. Not because I won’t don't have got another option.

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    June 2, 2015
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    Rubio will pit block name of American embassador in Cuba

    The Republican Senator and pre potential candidate to the White House (or: "potential presidential candidate") , Marco Rubio, said to John Kerry that he will be pit opposed to any naming of an American embassador in to Cuba until the Caribbean country has (or: "follows") some requirements that he considers basics.

    In the face of the imminent opening of embassies in the both countries after the exit removal of Cuba of from the list of countries that are sponsors of terrorism after the last round of negotiations, Rubio demanded harder (or: "more strict") rules to for Cuba.

    "Although Despite the five months of negotiations, I am worried about the lack of Human Right's reforms and the welcoming of terrorists and fugitives of American justice," wrote Rubio in a letter to Kerry. The senator, who has of Cuban roots (or: "of Cuban origin") and who has always been in opposition to Castro dictature dictatorship (or: "who has always opposed"), insisted to that the chief of American diplomacy put some conditions to the Latin American country in that along those themes to have a real change in the new relationship of between the United States and Cuba.

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    June 2, 2015
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    My way of learning languages 

    Today is my first day on italki.com. I wish me to find nice partners!

     

    Welcome to italki! I am new here, too. :)

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    June 2, 2015
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    The series of movies "The Hobbit"

    Lately Recently I saw the series of movies (or: "the movie series") "The Hobbit". They are stories before "The Lord of the Rings" and features some dwarves and a hobbit named Bilbo Baggins, who leave to regain the dwarves' home, which fell to a dragon, "Smaug" (or: "a dragon named Smaug").


    Before I watched them, I thought they would make just good killing just be a good way to kill time because a great deal of people (or: "because many people") favored "The Lord of the Rings". I agreed with that when it came to the first story. However, the others were beyond (or: "the others exceeded") my expectations. In the second one, the dragon was so terrifying, and at least, the third one was really comparable to "The Lord of the Rings" on the scale (I'm not sure what you mean by "on the scale"). With Based on the three episodes, I, like others, I also prefer "The Lord of the Rings", but I think this series is awesome except that only a few dwarves of the team are featured and they make good gifts for the big fans of "The Lord of the Rings" themselves.

    I heard that the actor on in the picture is Benedict Cumberbatch, who is playing the dragon. It cracked me up lol.

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    June 2, 2015
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    Fever

    I don't feel well right now. I just feel a little bit dizzy and limply. And my head is slightly painful (or: "my head hurts") and I have a fever. I guess I should take a half day off from the classes and have a good rest at home. I don't want to do anything but lie in my bed.
    I have not been sick for nearly three years which hasn't been (or: "which is not good") good to for my body because I heard that I would not will not have enough antibodies to protect my body from virus if I haven't been sick for a long time.

     

     

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    June 2, 2015
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    I'm in love or something like that

    Hello everyone,
    Recently I'm have fallen in love of with a girl. She is my classmate in at my university. I see her sometimes an and I have spoken with her sometimes but I'm a little shy. I think that talking with to a girl its is a little difficult. Her name is Karen. She is tall with black eyes (or: "she has black eyes") and she has a beautiful smile. I love it! Well I think that I have to improve my flirting skills or die hehehe. I forgot it to say that she loves video games like me !!!! She is perfect. I like girls with something special like her for example: she is a little shy like I am and she loves Keane, a British band.I have to improve my flirting skills hahaha. Bye.

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    June 2, 2015
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    The second on italki

    Today is my second day on italki. I like italki very much. I wrote a note yesterday and BOB replied to my note, and gave me some advice. He told me that you foreigners do not use qq and wechat as conmunication softwares, so I registered a skype id. My skype id is dreameranddoer2, if you want study Chinese and you can speak English, add my me on skype please. I am always free from 20:00 to 24:00, time of Beijing time. At this time we can practice our languages.

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    June 2, 2015
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    Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to ...

    Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

    I think schools should teach every young person how to be a good parent and how to treat their child. School and family are both important to children, so young couples should know how to raise a kid.

    Because of the one-child policy in China, young person people hasn’t had don't have sisters or brothers, so they are treated like pets by their parents. Many young person people don’t know how to care about for themselves (or: "how to take care of themselves") and they rely on their parents. So schools should teach them lots of important things about how to raise a kid.

    If a person wants to be a good parent, they need to know how to help their kid to build good life habits and good study habits. A right approach to communicate with their kid, it’s is very significant. For example, how to brush the their teeth, what time they should go to sleep, how to face the failure, how to make friends with other kids. Raise a kid, it’s very complicated things Raising a kid is a very complicated thing. I think schools should have regular classes to teach young couples.

    Especially, when the child grows up and comes into adolescence. How to talk with a teenager, how to continue to keep good relationships with a kid. That’s need requires more skills. If schools don’t educate young couples, it could cause some bad consequences, like drug use, hating study, bad scores and so on.

    Young couples should have enough patience and enough knowledge, they need to build a happy family, and / so they need to connect with school regularly. All in all, schools have a responsibility to teach enough skills to young parents to help them become a good parents, who can to raise a good kid.

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    June 2, 2015
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    Love? No, Thanks!

    Love? No, thanks!

    Since nobody (no one) could give me a satisfactory answer about what is love, I decided to do a deep research about the meaning of love (or: "I decided to research the ..."). I searched in a bunch of Psychology books, religious books, scientific books and I was still blank. And suddenly when I was thinking to abort about aborting the mission, an old book of Latin etymology appeared on my screen, so / and as you can guess I looked for the origins of the word "Love". Here is what I found.

    "Love" (Amar in Spanish) comes from the Latin word "Amær" that (which) means "Taking control of..." or "Conquered". So when someone says "I love her" or "I love him" what it he or she is really saying is "I am... taking control of... her or him".That make sense when we think in of / about the Spanish word "Amo" (slave owner). It was usual from for native prehispanic slaves to refer to his their owners like as "Amo" (The person who took control of them).

    And that is not all. The etymology of the name "America" is from the latin "Amæri", the plural of the verb "to love". Or as we said before, "Taking control of them" or "Conquered People". Originally the word was "Amæriarum". Two words "Amæri = Conquered people" and "Arum = Ring, Group of...", so the Spanish Kingdom put (gave) this name to the new (newly) conquered continent. It seems to me the most obvious approach instead of the Amerigo Vespucio thing...

    Nowadays, of course, those words have a completely different meaning. What really matters is that my question about love has a closest (I'm not sure what you mean by this) answer, and at least I have the certainty that Love IS NOT something that I need in order to have a wonderful life experience.

     

    Notes:

    Good job! The blue corrections are technically okay; they are just suggestions that sound more natural to English readers. One thing I have noticed is that Spanish speakers use more "run-on sentences", or long sentences with many parts. In English, we usually chop our writing into shorter sentences.

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    June 2, 2015
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