سفر
انا اسم موسي الصين بعمل سنتين في شركة نفط الصين من بصرة ولكن هذا موقع جو الحرولا رض الاصلع ما بزر اي نبات هبط طايرة الي مدرج البصرة
بعدين نزليت الي مطار اليصرة ركبت سيارة الي مخيم الصين
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(السفر) if it is a head title mostly come with (ال)
<address>(أنا) you forgot to put (ء) in (ا)</address><address>(أسمي) also you forgot to put (ء) in (ا) And to put (ي), (ي) is refers to you as (
MY name) </address><address>(موسى) not (موسي), (موسى) is your name but (موسي) mean (my shaving blade), see one letter change the hole mean.</address><address> </address><address>(أنا أسمي موسى
من الصين) you have to put (من) and it's a preposition in Arabi mean it here (
FROM china)</address><address>(أعمل) NOT (بعمل)</address><address> </address><address>(البصرة) NOT (بصرة) you should put (ال) in names.</address><address> </address><address>(الموقع) NOT (موقع)</address><address>(الجو) NOt (جو)</address><address>(حار) NOT (الحار)</address><address> </address><address>( و الإرض مقفرة) NOT(ولا رض الاصلع) </address><address>الاصلع mean bald man</address><address>مقفرة mean land with no plants in it</address><address> </address><address>so when you say (مقفرة) , you don't have to say (الاصلع ما بزر اي نبات) because word (مقفرة) short all this sentence.</address><address> </address><address>(هبطت) NOT (هبط) in Arabic the word is feminine or masculine there is no (it) like English, and (هبطت) is a feminine so you have to put (ت)</address><address>(الطائرة) NOT (طايرة)</address><address>(إلى) NOT (الي)</address><address> </address><address>(بعدين) is a slang word not a primary language so you must say (ثم) NOT (بعدين)</address><address>(نزلت) NOT (نزليت)</address><address>(إلى) NOT (الي)</address><address> </address><address>(
ثم ركبت سيارة) you must say (ثم) before (ركبت) and its mean (Then)</address><address>(إلى) NOT (الي)</address><address> </address><address> </address>