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  • Corrected

    Another way to correct this entry could be:


    1) A short diary.

    2) I love black coffee. because it has a very nice taste, and smell.
    3) I need coffee beans every morning.

     

    1) A title doesn't need puncuation if you choose not to include it.

    2) This can be one sentence. If you would like it to be two sentences try not to start a sentence with "because" if you can avoid it.

    3) Also your last sentence could read: "I need coffee every morning." to make a bit more sense. The way you wrote it seems like you need the beans instead of the drink. :}

     

    Good job though! Hope your learning goes well!

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    June 12, 2015
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    May 27, 2015
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    こんにちわ Hello Everyone! This is my first time ever writing in Japanese. So I have chosen only to write what I would say to introduce myself. Please correct any errors in my writing. Thank you!! こんにちわ. はじめまして. わたしのなまえわあびです. よろしく. おなまえわなんですか.
    May 27, 2015
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