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    August 30, 2015
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    About shooting stars!

    I want to write about something  wonderful today(,) that the world had to offer. (and) I had spent this past week (together) with my daughter. I needed to be almost 48 years old to see this rare event for the first time. (It does not make sense you include your age as a requirement. Try "In all my life or in all my long years-I have never witnessed such a phenomenon or-something so beautiful/exciting) The forecast called for shooting stars. Or they broadcasted on the news that tonight we would see meteor showers :" This will be the night of shooting stars." It was a very warm night, so my daughter and I laid on our sunbeds (sounds better to describe you were laying in sunbeds instead of saying it was hot thst is why we la yes in our sunbeds), which we put on our terrace and watched the sky. We talked about God and the world while we waited for the first one. Well, so when the first appeared, my daughter shouted:" Mummy look, there is one!" But imagine this, I was just rubbing my eye, so I missed it. So we both laughed so much then (my break is over I will finish later :(. But soon after, they appeared one by one. This really was one of the most wonderful moments that we spent together. It was a very special and emotional "mother-daughter-thing" I will never forget it and I guess, or I rather hope she will always remember to it as well.

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    August 20, 2015
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