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    Children and reading

    Thaks for your corrections!

    I want am going to talk about children and reading.

    Now a days Nowadays a lots lot of children don’t read because they prefer playing video games, watching TV or chatting. Kids love technology so in a few years they will be addictive addicted to it. For this reasons they don’t read a lot much. Children only read at school but it isn’t enough. They should read more and not only at in class.

    I think children should read more because they would learn a lot of new vocabulary also hey will have more comprehension in and they would understand their future better. If the children read they will learn new things.

    If you want to make your children read you could find books that they can find enjoyable. For instance, if your child loves The Simpsons you can buy books about this topic.

     

    Good job! Just check a few things:

    1. After the verb PREFER you need to put a verb in -ING.

    2. In a negative sentence subtitute A LOT with NOT MUCH/MANY. 

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    September 3, 2015
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    My First Week at Work

    Summer vacation ends is ending and schools begins it's going to start in a bit in China recently. I start am starting to work as an English teacher. I'm not sure about whether I can am qualify qualified for this job, because I'm not a perfect man. I'm poor at science and math. I can't wirte write beautiful excellent Chinese essays in Chinese, either. I'm afraid that I wont 't be able to guide students to learn what they need and get what they should. I'm worrying about my sentimental emotions having bad influence on their personailties. But all I can do is to keep calm and carry on.

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    September 3, 2015
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    Les temps dans mon paie pays.

    Aujourd'hui je vous vais vous parler de les du temps dans mon paie pays, en différencent différenciant comme est pendant chaque saison faisant la différence entre une saison et l'autre.
    Dans l' En hiver, il fait froid tous les jours et parfois il pluie pleut ou il y a de petits orages mais ça n'est pas normal n'arrive pas souvent.
    En Au printemps, il fait beau mais souvent en Avril il pluie pleut beaucoup, mais normalment il fait soleil il fait beau.
    Dans l' En aôut, il pluie pleut beacoup et il commence à faire froid mais il y a bonnes la temperatures est bonne.
    Et pour finir, dans l' en été, il fait très chaud et toujours il fait soleil il fait toujours beau mais souvent il y a il y a souvent des orages, propes bien typiques du de l'été.

     

    C'est bien! Tout est clair, mail il y a des fautes qui se répètent.

    1) pour les saisons on dit toujours EN (été, par exemple), sauf que PRINTEMPS, où on dit AU.

    2) pluie est le substantif, le verbe est IL PLEUT.

    3) meme si "temps" se termine par S, c'est du singulier, donc l'article sera LE

    4) "paie" est du verbe payer, le "country" est PAYS.

     

    J'espère que tout est clair =)

     

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    August 31, 2015
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    aussi "a portée de (la) main", ça veut dire "tout près" =)
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    August 31, 2015
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    0831 - The Big Pool

    The Big Pool.

    This picture we can shows a beautiful place in a big house. There is a great pool with some people in it. I think have there are four women, three women of them is are stopping not moving and one other another one is swimming. And have Moreover, there are others other people in the board broad pool and they don't have beach clothes are not wearing any swimsuit. I think it's because have there is no hot sun, maybe is it's midday because we can't see their shadow. And have Furthermore, there is a man stopping look standing still looking at the pool and at the landscape. Probably he had been in the house because he is wearing a some black jeans, a black shirt and is holding a blouse or a jacket, and with a backpack.

    Vocabulary:
    - A man
    - Pool
    - Sunshade ( It is correct?) It does exist but it has a different meaning from shadow
    - Sea
    - Sunbathe
    - Beach lounge chair
    - Summer clothes
    - Landscape
    - Midday
    - Backpack

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    August 31, 2015
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    famiglia

    La mia famiglia e' messicana ma io, i miei fratelli e le mie sorelle siamo nati qui negli Stati Uniti. Io sono il più giovane dei cinque. Tutti sono tutti sposati e hanno dei figli, tranne io. Come musicista e' difficile perchè sono sempre impegnato. Forse un giorno ma prima voglio viaggiare, studiare di piu'.
    La mia famiglia e' una famiglia messicana tradizionale. Molto cattolica e sempre pensando nella famiglia molto legata ai valori della famiglia tradizionale e al cibo. Inoltre, litighiamo spesso anche stiamo sempre litigando. Ogni weekend(fine settimana) il mio fratello fa' fa il bbq. Mangiamo molta carne e pollo con i fagioli e il riso. Anche lui fa Cucina anche altre cose ma questi sono questo è normalmente lo ciò che normalmente mangiamo.

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    August 31, 2015
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