First Time in China
This time I want to write about my first trip to China. It will be the first time telling a story in Cantonese, so you will find a lot of things to correct. Also I'm not sure, if I have to use a special verb ending or whatever. Haha so we will see.
我九年（旧年）八月第一次去中國。我同我嘅跳舞crew（舞团）參加替換同香港跳舞crew（舞团）（我同我嘅舞团被邀请同香港舞团交换）。我好幸運我嗰餐(阵）時冇（唔洗）考試。
(所以）我同我嘅跳舞crew（舞团），一啲塗鴉人（几个涂鸦艺术者）同一個舍監（监督人）去（咗/it means you have been went there）中國。
我嘅搭直達飛機法蘭克福到香港（我哋喺法兰克福搭直打飞机到香港）。香港跳舞人等我嘅喺機場（当我哋到达香港机场喺时候香港舞团嘅人已经喺機場等我哋了）。我哋搭咗巴士之后（it means“after”,after you took the bus,you took the subway）同MTR（地铁）去youth center（青年中心/少年宫？）。我住讀左一個星期嗰便/處(我哋喺青年中心住咗一个星期）同（埋）好多跳舞（跳咗好多舞）。
可時（当）我哋（出去/means"go out")行街(嘅时候），我學咗我嘅第一個（句/you said a sentence :)廣東句（话）。你哋通常先學“hello(妳好）” or（或者）“ thank you（多谢）",但係我學“I'm a handsome boy（我喺靓仔）". 呢個(可能）係我學过最重要嘅句子。點解？我下次會話你知。
The first time I went to China was last August. I had the chance to go there, because my dance crew was invited for an exchange with a crew from HK. I was very lucky that I had no exams around that time. So me, my crew, some graffiti artists and a supervisor went to China.
We took a non-stop flight from Frankfurt to Hong Kong. At the airport dancers from HK were waiting for us. We took the bus and MTR to a youth center (Youth Outreach in Sai Wan Ho). We lived in the youth center for 1 week and danced a lot.
When we went out, I also learned my first words of cantonese. Usually you learn words like 'hello' or 'thank you', but my first words were "I'm a handsome guy". This probably is the most important sentence I ever learned. Why? I will tell you next time ;p
Okay I decided to split the story in two parts or probably more. The trip was only two weeks, but a lot things happend.
I always had a hard time to think of useful vocabulary. I think the notebook entries are a good way to find useful words. Last time I tried to write in Cantonese and give a English translation, but I only used sentences I already know. So this time I started with the english text and translated it to Cantonese.
I'm sorry I changed too much:P I can't use my phone cause I'm on duty but I can use my computer:)I hope you can make progress~
