One message 一封信

Dear XXXX

I got your text, thank you (sounds less abrupt). This afternoon I spent three hours to finishing my message. Sorry that I disappointed you in your logging (not sure what this means). I admire people who are developed naturally (naturally gifted??).
Tonight I enjoy (enjoyed/am enjoying/will enjoy) the music on youtube. I feel happy and relaxed. I appreciate my teacher. She recommended us a lot of upbeat and rhythm music to us.
I don't want to turn you down. if I could I would be nice to you too.
I'm curious as to why you say use sentences without stops and or breaks. like water waves.
You said you have go sailing in at the weekend. The purpose of life is to enjoy be happiness happy and to improves day by day.
I do am not good at communication and pronunciation. I don't how to use the functionknow how they work.

Sincerely,
XXXX

我收到你的信，这个下午我花了三个小时才完成你的信。对不起让你登录的时候失望了。我欣赏顺其自然的。
今晚我很高兴和很放松。因为我在youtube里享受着音乐。我感谢我的老师，推存了很多积极乐观的旋律歌给我。
我不想拒绝你，假如我能够，我将会听你的。
我好奇你为什么你的说话没有停顿？就好像水浪一样。
你说这个周未有滑帆活动。人生就是要快乐，明天才会更好。
我不善于交际，也不会发言。更不会使用这个网站的功能。


Please correct my English. Attachment is city skywalk of night Boston. Enjoy the color of night.

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