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    Government should not offer tuition for all the students who cannot afford

    In my opinion, there may be better ways to solve the problem that the students who have been admitted by universities cannot afford the tuition. The method provided by the author that the government offer the tuition sounds good but is difficult to realize.
    First of all, I can understand the kindness of the author. The wish to make all the students who have been admitted by universities can go to universities is a good wish. I appreciate this idea. But there is something to be think deeply.
    Firstly, to offer the students can not afford the tuition all over the country needs a great deal of money. whether or not the government can afford this burden and whether or not the government will pay so much money for them. The money belongs to all the taxpayers. The money should be paid on the things that sever to all of the people or most of the people in this country. Such as raising the level of healthcare or offering more job and so on. Secondly, there are other ways to solve this problem. For example, the government can lend the students money which only need to be repaid after the students graduate. Set up scholarship by government, enterprises and persons can also be helpful. And this can be more incentive to make the students work harder in the college time. Thirdly, supporting by government to particular part of students is unjust. By setting up scholarship that any students can apply to help students to afford their tuitions may be reasonable.
    In a conclusion, I think the method that the tuition afford by government is unreasonable. There are other ways to help the students go to universities if they work hard.

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    November 10, 2015
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    is there anyone who can help me by correcting my writing?
    November 9, 2015
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    what's the meaning of "the order of the day"
    November 3, 2015
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    November 2, 2015
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    奥克兰

    你们好!我是新西兰人。我住在新西兰的奥克兰。奥克兰是新西兰的最大城市,有1500000人。奥克兰有许多很有意思的地方。例如天空塔、一树山、海港大桥和朗伊托托岛。奥克兰原本有很多火山,但是目前它们都处于休眠状态。我真的觉得奥克兰是一个很好的城市。因为它还很多中国人,所以我可以跟中国人一起聊天。

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    October 30, 2015
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    翻译the ordeal that brought some coherence to the hitherto random pattern of his youth.
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    不是今天天气冷,就是天气不暖和

    我有一个写一篇博客的想法(idea is better than feel in this place.),不过我还不知道我应该写什么。我打算去把我的头发剪了(ganerally,"快要"is used to describe some things that will occur immediately.for example,万圣节就要到了。In this place,haircut is the thing you want to do, and it will not occur if you change your mind.  )。我的头发长得太长了。我记得我上一次剪头是两个月前的事儿。那时我在中国。再说我还没买我的万圣节的服装,万圣节服装这么贵(这件衣服is same to 万圣节服装)。连那家打折店都很贵。为了省钱,我想我还是自己弄我的服装吧。我一直想在万圣节扮耶稣,不过也许这个主意有争议,哈哈。我有这个想法的原因是我已经有耶稣的头发,不是我自己的头发哈哈,就是假发,去年万圣节的假发。其实戴着这个假发看起来像流浪汉的样子,哈哈哈,这是因为这头发有一个又长又乱又有好多圈的胡子。

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    October 29, 2015
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    我的中国之旅

    你们好!我今年跟朋友一起去了中国的三个城市:上海、西安和北京。我们先从新西兰坐飞机到上海。我们在上海住了六天。我们去了东方明珠塔、复旦大学和外滩。因为上海很大,所以我觉得它是我的最喜欢的城市。然后我们从上海坐火车到西安。西安市比上海小,但是它比奥克兰(我的家乡)仍然大很多。我们去西安主要是为了参观兵马俑。兵马俑非常古老,也很惊人。最后我们从西安坐高铁到北京。这个火车比较快。我们在北京登上了长城。虽然爬长城很累,但是它是一个非常好玩儿的经历。因为我的旅行结束了,所以不幸的是我必须回家。我不想回家(though I don't understand this sentence, I guess you want to say "I don't want to go home ")。我打算后年去中国的上海上复旦大学。

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    October 29, 2015
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