Correct my mistakes, please

1)The concert will last from 11 untill 12 o`clock.这场音乐会从11点持续至12点。
2)He was afraid of being punished. 他怕挨罚
3)What problems are the most typical for teenagers.哪些是青少年典型的问题。
4)The teacher showed us different methods of doing this task.老师给我们展示了做这个任务的不同方法。
5)What is this film about?这是关于什么的电影呢？
6)Can you advise me how to behave in this situation?你能告诉我在这种情况怎样表达吗 
7)Instead of going to the park he went to the cafe他去了咖啡馆（网吧？），而不是公园。
8)He made this car himself.他自己制作这辆车。 
9)The programmer will create advanced software这个程序员将创造先进的软件
10)I will arrange this competition.我会安排这次比赛。
11)Don`t speak with me in this way!不要跟我这样说话
12) I love the way you speak.我喜欢你说话的方式。
13)He is a teacher with 10 years experience.他是有10年（教学）经验的老师。
14)The time/date of competition was changed.比赛的时间/日期被改变了。
15)It is one of the best cafes I have ever visited.这是我曾经访问过的最好的咖啡馆之一。