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    ホストファミリのメール 木村さん、 今日は。お元気ですか？すみません、私は日本語をよく話せません。 私の名前はガルシア・フェリペです。兄が二人います。姉が一人います。毎週の週末、家族と時間をかけます。 つまらない質問で恐縮ですが、木村さんの興味があることは何ですか？何をしていますか？ 私は何かを持っていかなくてはいけませんか？ お宅でホームステイさせていただいてありがとうございます。お会いにできるのを楽しみにしています。 ガルシア・フェリペ
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    Hi Echo,

    I think you wrote very well. I am not sure if you are interested in capitalization but in English we capitalize titles, proper nouns (a person's name, names of places, and I are all proper nouns) and the first letter of the word that begins a sentence. We also have a space after a period at the end of a sentence.

     

    I think you meant to say "have a nice day" for your last sentence.

     

    I hope this helps you. Thank you for your sharing this with us! 

     


    The Seed Germination

    I bought some flowers and vegetables seeds on 2015.4.24._Then I planted them in the flower pot the day before yesterday. This morning some seeds have sprouted._I'm so happy that I wanted to share this with you. Nice day.

     

     

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    April 29, 2015
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